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The Laundromat
Author: DragonFire
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(Added on Nov 5, 2003)
(This month 41005 readers) (Total 72529 readers) |
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A pretty lady tries to find Customer Service... |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
Average
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Dolbyuiop
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Jan 24, 2008 |
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Very well written and erotic. (8/10)
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J's blu
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Aug 22, 2006 |
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this story is so hot! well written, well paced, well done! (10/10)
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mkemse
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Apr 29, 2005 |
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i liked this very much (9/10)
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longrover
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May 5, 2004 |
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Robots are not interesting sex partners. (6/10)
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- Replied by:
Jimmy Green
(Edit) (Nov 27, 2005)
- I have been thinking for weeks on this feedback you have given DragonFire on his story and no matter how many times I read it I just don't find it fair.
I'm sure you meant it well but saying that "Robots are not interesting sex partners" is like introducing a ballbat to a mirror of Fetish". How would you like it if you wrote a great emotional story about a stright guy meeting a woman and they had some good sex together and one of the feedback to your story was "Women are not interesting sex partners".
I'm sure you would question what he/she meant with that and perhaps ask about it and demand a more serious review. I have read many of our other reviews and you give strong good feedback.
I fail to see why you didn't feel like giving proper feedback to this one.
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lord_odie
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Apr 22, 2004 |
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Wow. Great story is about all I can say. Very erotic stuff. I personally love the somewhat willing masocism of some of these women. Keep up the good work. (10/10)
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Wyn
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Feb 12, 2004 |
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Wow. The creativity level of this through the roof. Diabolical and erotic all in a nice package. (10/10)
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Curtis
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Dec 30, 2003 |
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Reviewed after part five. I can't believe how you've been able to extend this subject...and still maintain both the quality and the variety. I'm just awesomely impressed. This is actually a good place to end (and start another story, of course!). It's surprising that this is your first story at this site. Wunderbar! (10/10)
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Engineer
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Dec 15, 2003 |
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Fantastic! What an idea! And a pleasure to read, regarding style as well as content. More, please! And soon! (10/10)
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TheCat
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Dec 13, 2003 |
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Hits me where I live! As an author, I appreciate the detail, timing, and end result. Would have preferred more pleasure, but this IS bdsm.
Continuation Idea: She sets up a friend, enemy, mother-in-law, etc. for a cleaning. After XX amount of visits, allowed to view proceedings from video booth with magical chairs, loungers, love seats for two (FF), etc.
Companion Story: Cheating husband visits porno peep shows/gloryholes and spirals into machine oblivion. (9/10)
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Lord Douche
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Dec 12, 2003 |
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No complaints here! An excellent story, and different from most on this site. A welcome change :) (10/10)
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lex ludite
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Nov 25, 2003 |
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Something a bit off the beaten path and very welcome to this reader. Now that you've got me hooked, it better be good. After reading the next two installments I must say that this is an amazing effort. It is very well written, the care and attention to details is damn near flawless,and above all it is very novel. All this said, my rating is now revised to reflect the fact that the author has delivered, big time! (10/10)
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e.e. norcod
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Nov 25, 2003 |
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Very Clever! Something different for once. I presume there is more to come! Unlike Moggy I liked the lead in. It gave me some background into the character of the lady in question - and lulled me into thinking this was going to be just another abduction and rape story.
Chapter 4 has forced, yes forced me to upgrade my rating from a nine to a ten! This is the greatest mechanical sex act since the "raping robots" of the X rated "Flesh Gordan" movie of twenty-five years ago. Now if only there is a chapter 5 with a mind rending climax! (10/10)
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kemosabe
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Nov 20, 2003 |
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The first addition to my personal library! By far one of the best stories to be published in a long, long time. I am really looking forward to the next chapter. (10/10)
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crickette
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Nov 12, 2003 |
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Pretty good story. Definately a interesting idea. I like the comment about the machine looking at her triumphantly while she just hung there. It was also well-written and had a nice flow. (7/10)
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testncut
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Nov 8, 2003 |
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This might be the story I have been dreaming so much about seeing here on BDSMlibrary.com. I must admit it really have caught my attention as well and is really excited what might be happening next. It's just such a lovely story so far and I'm sure it will be in the coming chapters. I present you with a 10 for this amazing story and hope the other peoples and my words makes you want to continue writting on this. Keep up the Good work. (10/10)
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GaryWilcox
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Nov 8, 2003 |
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This one has got my attention... and its getting better by the chapter... (8/10)
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Moggy
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Nov 6, 2003 |
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"THE WASH-A-WOMAN AUTOMATED FEMALE CLEANSING SYSTEM" Cute!
Quite good so far. Another 7 from me. I assume there are more 'cycles' to come...
I'm not sure about the initial description and background stuff. Is it relevant to the story?) (7/10)
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