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Occupational Hazzards
Author: Bruce Boxer
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(Added on Jul 1, 2000)
(This month 213685 readers) (Total 288897 readers) |
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A military interrogator recareers as a torturer for a secret organization. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
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metoo
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Mar 21, 2007 |
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seemed like a lession.... (6/10)
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Travis
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Nov 11, 2006 |
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Thoroughly enjoyed it. (10/10)
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Samantha
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Jan 20, 2006 |
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Loved it. For anyone who is into interogation (or torture), they should enjoy this story very much. I found that there were some unexpected plot redirections which aided in keeping the reader interested. I also found the descriptions of how the prisoners/victims were bound, restricted and tortured very vivid. I could really form an image in my mind. Like that too. What I also liked was the fact that you didn't bombard your writing with an unneccary use (or abuse) of adjectives and descriptions. Oh! You may want to check the formatting towards the last 6 or so chapters as the writing is wrapping around in strange way. That destracts the reader is all. So you might want to look into why tha wrapping effect is happenig mid-line I look forward to reading more of your stories. (10/10)
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mkemse
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Sep 8, 2003 |
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Hope there is more, and I hope you focus more on the female prissoners (8/10)
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CoffinNail
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Dec 31, 2002 |
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Closes eyes, swallows back the bile . . .
Save yourselves, folks--run away!
--CN (1/10)
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Tim_Id
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Sep 19, 2002 |
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Overall a good effort. Too clinical at first, later the story flows easier. At times it gets too brutal. Makes me think of those Rocky movies, like how much abuse can a person take and come back for more? Could use more sex. (7/10)
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hdsport93
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Nov 3, 2001 |
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Thought it was very well written and hot--where do you get an application for a job there :) (10/10)
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Darryl |
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Nov 25, 2000 |
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Looking for sexy stories; found this junk about torture. (1/10)
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Paul J. |
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Nov 19, 2000 |
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Pitiful attempt at telling a tale. (1/10)
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Cheeky |
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Nov 18, 2000 |
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One word: BAD. (1/10)
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Nosey |
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Nov 18, 2000 |
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Lipper is wrong -- this story appears to have been written by an illiterate person who doesn't know how to chose which (or is it witch) sound-alike word to use. (1/10)
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Lipper |
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Nov 18, 2000 |
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What a bunch of illiterates...sigh (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
al2 |
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Nov 18, 2000 |
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nothing sexy or hot in this stinker (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
Claire |
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Nov 18, 2000 |
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I was looking for a "Hot Story" but this one was a stinker. I'd have given it a "0" if it was possible... (1/10)
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John |
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Nov 18, 2000 |
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piss poor. read it all hoping it'd get better, but it was a major waste of my time... (1/10)
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al |
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Nov 17, 2000 |
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very good, read it all (10/10)
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Joanne |
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Nov 16, 2000 |
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Just awful. (1/10)
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Fred |
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Nov 15, 2000 |
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Suzi is so right - this is a terrible excuse for a story! I can't believe that AlmaLou even read this garbage....if she did, she'd know how bad it is and how bad the grammer errors are in it. (1/10)
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AlmaLou |
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Nov 15, 2000 |
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Good story! (10/10)
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Suzi |
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Nov 15, 2000 |
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This is not a story. There is no storyline. It's only a series of vignettes -- and they are of the "mechanical" variety (ie: put rope on part a, pull tight, attach weight to part be...) (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
anna39 |
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Nov 11, 2000 |
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Very erotic! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
hutzzer |
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Nov 9, 2000 |
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Think this was an outstanding story and written very well. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
B&D&Me |
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Oct 29, 2000 |
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nothing stimulating or provacative here very mundane and boring and i agree that the way it was written was pretty bad. (3/10)
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Wilberfont |
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Oct 26, 2000 |
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goodone (10/10)
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M-Man |
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Oct 24, 2000 |
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Not as bad as the bondage on a boat story, but not a real lot better either. And i agree with some of the other reviewers. Someone is playing games trying to inflate the rating of this story. Sheeesh. Why bother ????? (2/10)
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Wrigley |
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Oct 23, 2000 |
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Outstanding to awful--I vote for the former--good job Bruce Boxter! On to more stories! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Shinerson |
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Oct 23, 2000 |
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Superb! Then I read the other reviews--it's dod-eat dog isn't it? (10/10)
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Quick2serve |
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Oct 22, 2000 |
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I checked this #1 "Hot story" and thought it was great. I don't understand all the nasty slams. As I looked at the other rankings, I think I finally figured it out. Authors trying to screw each other. And on a free web page --sheesh. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dave |
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Oct 22, 2000 |
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Awful ! (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
Maree. |
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Oct 22, 2000 |
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Silly plot and the writing is SO bad ! (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
Melissa the Grouch |
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Oct 15, 2000 |
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I liked the violence! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Shiela |
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Oct 14, 2000 |
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Exquisite. Really enjoyed it. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Harry |
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Oct 7, 2000 |
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Nice storyline; fine tortures (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
1st Base. |
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Oct 5, 2000 |
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I think _snake_ is onto something. It was the number of reviews that attracted my attention to this story. The stories ok, but I can undferstand that the way it was written could be irritating to a lot of people. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Snake |
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Oct 1, 2000 |
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The reviews of this story are far more interesting that the story itself. It's rather odd that everytime someone submits a review that is critical of the story, there's a sudden splurge of '10/10' reviews. Someone called 'The Tennant' says they didn't like it, and then amazingly, someone coincidently called 'The Landlord' comes along with a 10/10. THREE 10/10s on the same day in fact? Then 2 more, and another 2 more on consecutive days???? Not very subtle really, and all rather amusing. This story is no 10/10, it's not too bad, but the reviews are good for a laugh. (3/10)
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Simply me |
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Oct 1, 2000 |
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As a submissive to a couple, I love to read about bdsm and sexual torture. This story was right up my alley. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Lorimanners |
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Oct 1, 2000 |
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Suberp. Well written and exciting. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Julia |
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Sep 30, 2000 |
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I'm being featured in Bruce's next story--it'll be as good as this one! (10/10)
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SourGirl |
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Sep 30, 2000 |
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Loved it! (10/10)
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Paul |
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Sep 27, 2000 |
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Good writing, good plot--lot's of twists and turns, Especially turned me on. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Bill |
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Sep 27, 2000 |
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Great BDSM; I liked the twins as well! (10/10)
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The Landlord |
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Sep 27, 2000 |
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To each his own--wonderful style and story! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
The Tennant. |
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Sep 27, 2000 |
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I thought it was pretty ordinary. Didn't like the way it was written at all. (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
Posiden |
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Sep 26, 2000 |
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Loved it! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Jenn C. |
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Sep 26, 2000 |
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Excellent story. I thought it was hot. Especially like the twin torturers--good characterzation. (10/10)
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Baxter |
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Sep 12, 2000 |
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There seems to be a diverse range of opinions on this story. Personally, I didn't like it much at all. (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
Betts |
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Sep 10, 2000 |
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I think it's a terrific story--would like to see mor from this author. (10/10)
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Kim |
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Sep 6, 2000 |
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This story isn't the 'best of the bunch' nor is it 'amateur time' in my opinion. It's ok. Perhaps when Randy gets to 7th grade he might have a better understanding of 'proper English'??? (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
Randy |
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Sep 4, 2000 |
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A Brunette Woman, and the other 7th graders may have had a hard time reading this story because it used proper English an punctuation. (10/10)
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Julie |
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Sep 4, 2000 |
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Best of the bunch! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
ABrunetteWoman |
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Aug 30, 2000 |
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I found the way it was written made it very difficult to read too. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
James |
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Aug 30, 2000 |
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Not bad, but the writing style makes it very hard to read. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
Brocky |
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Aug 27, 2000 |
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To borrow the phrase of another reviewer. Ameteur Time. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
TJ |
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Aug 27, 2000 |
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A good idea, very poorly executed. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
rajat |
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Aug 26, 2000 |
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excellant, such innovative situations, please keep it up. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Sioban |
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Aug 20, 2000 |
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Tr¨¨s merveilleux! Merci! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dieter |
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Aug 19, 2000 |
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Sehr gute Geschichte. Das Zeichen Travis wurde gut entwickelt. (10/10)
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Susan |
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Aug 15, 2000 |
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I know the author and he spent a lot of time polishing this saga--and it shows--good job Bruce! (10/10)
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Cisco |
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Aug 14, 2000 |
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Outstanding story--exciting and hot. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Jim |
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Aug 6, 2000 |
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Jesus! You think stuff like this really goes on? I'm moving to Maryland! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Gunther |
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Aug 3, 2000 |
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Super! Loved it! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Tracy |
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Aug 2, 2000 |
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Excellent plot and good description. I want to BE in this story! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Tina |
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Aug 1, 2000 |
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Oh my God! I'm STILL wet after reading this :) Outstanding! (10/10)
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Sara |
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Jul 31, 2000 |
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I loved this story. Adventure, mental turmoil, strong women, strong men--it was all here. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Robert |
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Jul 4, 2000 |
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Wow! What an epic! Lot's of situations, vivid descriptions--hot sex! Bravo! (10/10)
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