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On the Water
Author: Leviticus
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(Added on Feb 24, 2001)
(This month 175692 readers) (Total 221877 readers) |
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These two couples had been talking about their lifestyles over the internet for one year. Now they finally met each other and had a fun trip on their boat: and their lives were forever changed. |
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Average (?):  (9.5/10) |
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MasterGA
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Apr 27, 2008 |
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The author finished the story the way only the best writers can. He makes you think about how it ended. Laura accepted her chastity belt from Ben; she obeyed him and not her husband. From the time Ben tortured her on the island, he owned her. Laura's new Master was Ben. This story is worth a 10+!
I would love to read the sequel to it though. (10/10)
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jstigger
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Mar 7, 2006 |
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I have liked everything written by this author and beg that they write more and more. As a married sub I really connect with these characters. Thank you Leviticus I eagerly await your next story (10/10)
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tabuk
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Nov 22, 2005 |
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This is a great story - until the end. The thought that is put into the main characters just doesn't deserve the ending it got. Other than that it had me hooked all the way. (7/10)
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Master Ra
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May 15, 2005 |
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You are a master writer but please finish this classic. It has been four years. Do you have plans to finish it?, if not it is a shame. (10/10)
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Reddbunnz
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Mar 25, 2005 |
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Great Story--until I got to the ending. The ending is very anti-climatic, and ruined the rest of the story. Therefore, I must deduct points for the ending. Becuase of the ending, I only rate it "Average". (6/10)
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Arasaki
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Jan 3, 2005 |
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The story is good, and that's why I afforded it an eight, but sadly, I feel that the end of it ruins it quite a lot. If you want to know what I mean, I suggest reading it. It's well worth it, if you can handle a disappointment at the end of an otherwise great story (8/10)
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hewiitlai
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Oct 19, 2004 |
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excellent. best of all I have read (10/10)
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lanee
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May 22, 2004 |
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I could not stop reading it...all 153 pages...looking forward to more... (10/10)
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Feb 6, 2004 |
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Great story. Great characters, plot development. (10/10)
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Spazz
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Sep 12, 2003 |
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I absolutly loved it. It was worth the time to read. Also, More to the story than expected. Thank you Liviticus. ;) (10/10)
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araya_tom
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Jul 28, 2003 |
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Well done. I do hope that this is the beginning of a new story, not the end of this one (9/10)
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Aurelius
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Jun 16, 2002 |
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Very well written, for those that like a good story and characters you care about. Great sexy tie-up action. One of the best! (10/10)
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Tim_Id
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Mar 11, 2002 |
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Lots of bondage and intrigue. Complex story and characters. Many loose ends and cliffhanger at the end keeps this long tale from a perfect rating. (9/10)
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taskmaster
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Jun 28, 2001 |
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Leviticus writes believable characters -- people you almost feel you know. Enjoyed almost all the situations they find themselves. Looking forward to a sequel,we hope. (10/10)
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Engineer |
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Apr 5, 2001 |
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Once again, Leviticus proved himself as a master in the art of BDSM writing. Once again, he combined various genres with taste and sense for psychology. (9/10)
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Janette |
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Mar 12, 2001 |
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Leviticus outdid himself with this story! Characters we care about, an interesting plot, and lots of bondage and sex! Unlike some of the bad writers on this site, he makes his characters and storyline worth the time we must invest to read it. (10/10)
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Easyrolf |
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Mar 5, 2001 |
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One of Leviticus great stories. And the end is
only unsatisfactory if you don`t know the
continuation. (9/10)
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Sea |
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Feb 28, 2001 |
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Leviticus writes a story with a plot. More than wham bam thank you mam. (10/10)
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Johnny |
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Feb 26, 2001 |
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Great bondage and lots of skin, my kind of story. (10/10)
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Painfully_Yours |
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Feb 25, 2001 |
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Great story. worth reading. (10/10)
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