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Prisoner of Submisson
Author: Dark Rider Angmar
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(Added on Dec 24, 2003)
(This month 122448 readers) (Total 181153 readers) |
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A business woman and soccer mom falls under the dominating spell of a co-worker and descends into decadency. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Martiniman
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Jan 25, 2012 |
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This story is fabulous, long, detailed, highly erotic & a must read. It's wonderful to get a D/s story that includes so much. First off its nice to have a D/s story that is consensual, between coworkers, is done with love & completes what both women want & need. This story is not destructive to the sub or her life, only fulfilling & that is refreshing. Yet, I love how Karen continually pushes Sue into more degrading acts. Of course Sue is reluctant, yet her true slut self finally capitulates & she falls farther into her slave status to Karen...loving every bit of it. Plenty of hot sex, humiliating situations & has a nice long sensual build up before the story explodes & Sue gets to realize all her fantasies, as well as realize her true submissive slut self. 23 chapters of bliss & I'm only wishing there were more chapters! (10/10)
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Dryhill
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Mar 21, 2010 |
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I would have given it a ten if it had a little more editing (especially spelling mistakes). I like the whole story very much and think it is about time you wrote some more.
You could have the husband finding out and either throwing Sue out or liking the slutty wife he is now getting and encouraging the D/s relationship (I prefer the latter). (9/10)
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Marduk
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Mar 5, 2004 |
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It's a very good story. A little bit hardness is missing, because it's an storyidea I like und very good written.. (9/10)
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e.e. norcod
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Mar 1, 2004 |
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I like a story that starts slow and builds. This tale is now hitting its peak. The question is, what novel twists and turns will greet us? Can the author lead us down paths of depravity previously untrod? Frankly, I would like to see our newly trained slut turn on her Mistress and inflict a little torment on her creator. Here is to many more kinky chapters. (8/10)
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gillian
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Feb 27, 2004 |
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The story started off a bit slow but now it just gets better and better. I can't wait for the next chapter. (9/10)
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jbowler65
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Feb 4, 2004 |
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Great beginning to the story. However, after Karen reveals herself, it seems that everything loses focus. The details and build up early are now missing. It seems to have lost transition between the chapters and is moving from one "scene" to another. (7/10)
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bizzer
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Jan 31, 2004 |
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extremely well written wellthought out just great (10/10)
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lex ludite
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Jan 29, 2004 |
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I don't really know where this one is going, but it sure is fun waiting to find out. Sue and Karen are both well drawn characters and most believable. I share the impatience of some of the previous reviewers; let's get down to cases! Well it seems I've gotten my wish and am not impressed. The writing is good but this story, true or not, does not show any novelty or originality. This one has been written, rewritten and written again, over and over and over. At this point I must take my leave and continue my quest for something more original. No offense to the writer who seems to have developed a following for this work, but it's too slow and too mild for my tastes. (6/10)
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banderson
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Jan 7, 2004 |
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Very good story. I like the transition from mom/wife to slut and I can't wait to see where author takes it. Only reason I didn't rate it higher -- your paragraphs are too long! Break them up whenever you have changes in action, thoughts, etc. (8/10)
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Will Storm
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Jan 6, 2004 |
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Just wanted to drop you a note about how good your new story posted at bdsmlibrary is. The slow creation of a wanton slut from a regular everyday woman is quite erotic. Taking a respectible woman and allowing her to wallow in her own humiliating and submissive desires to the point where her fantasies become her reality is a real turn on. I look forward to more chapters in your subject's evolution into a submissive lesbian slut. Thanks for writing. (9/10)
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MDOFlahertyII
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Jan 2, 2004 |
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I hope that you have more stories as this was very enjoyable. (9/10)
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buskeyTR
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Jan 2, 2004 |
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Very good start to this story. Characters are well written and believable. I look forward to reading a lot more. (9/10)
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stardancer
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Dec 31, 2003 |
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Prisoner of Submission is a very exciting story and I can't wait to read more of the story.
The adventures of Sue as she learns to be a submissive slut are very well written. This story is a tremendous turn on and one of the best lesbian submission stories I have read lately.
Exactly what Karen has in store for Sue is yet to be known. The reader feels very drawn into the story and really, just like I was in the room watching!!!! Mistress K begins online training and it is very exciting to witness.
Keep writing. This is actually a series I would like to see never end! The adventures of Sexy Slutty Sue could last a long time.
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mkemse
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Dec 31, 2003 |
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How can you make it consensual and reluctant, it has to be one or the other
Kinda like being sorta pregnant, either you are or aren't
Either you are reluctant or your are not (7/10)
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jmar
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Dec 28, 2003 |
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Great start,keep it going (9/10)
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bdsmbill
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Dec 27, 2003 |
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Yes, a very good start. Now, don't keep us waiting too long! No matter what they tell you, patience is not a virtue. Besides, people here are not interested in your virtue. (9/10)
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SpeechMastr
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Dec 26, 2003 |
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Nice build up...I can't wait for more (9/10)
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XtremeInk
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Dec 26, 2003 |
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The action in this story is hot Hot HOT! Plus, it has CONTENT - it's a story rather than just a fuck fest. It was a really great read. The only reason it wasn't rated a 9 by me was because the author's witing style is a bit stilted here and there. But, perhaps, that will be smoothed out by time.
Great stuff! Looking forward for more. (8/10)
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