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The Plight of Patti
Author: Trainman
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(Added on Jan 14, 2004)
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20 year old blonde Patti is kidnapped, stretched and suspended. Then she is humiliated and raped before being sold for auction. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Mar 10, 2008 |
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so far so good, i am anxious to see where you go from here (10/10)
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boccaccio2000g
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Jan 18, 2004 |
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I liked it. Nothing fancy, just good clean male-dominant fun. No characterization to speak of, too many overlong paragraphs, and the dialogue failed to live up to the tension of the moment. But the author has a nice descriptive sense. I too hope to see the further adventures of Patti. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
jbowler65
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Jan 17, 2004 |
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Nice slow build up to the story. Can't wait until the next installment. (8/10)
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e.e. norcod
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Jan 14, 2004 |
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A better story than the author's previous "Plight" effort. The author very lovingly discribes the oh-so-slow stripping and deflowering of this young lady and then leaves us (properly) in suspense as to what further degredation awaits her. However, we are never really taken inside the mind of Patti or her assailant. What are their motives, where are they coming from, how do they change? This is what separates good fiction from mere action.
Let's see how this story developes! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Faibhar
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Jan 14, 2004 |
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Part One of "TPoP" wallows in little plot and plenty of sadism - just the thing for readers so inclined. Subsequent installments allude to further action and faster plot development that may come with those added chapters are encouraged. (7/10)
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