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The Interns
Author: DocilePet
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(Added on Jan 27, 2004)
(This month 167618 readers) (Total 302196 readers) |
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Tamala Barker, Attorney at Law, was a very successful business woman. After the breakup of a short marriage she became somewhat depressed. That is, until she met Dr. Mary Mercy, a medical doctor with a PhD in pyschiatry. They became lovers and partners and, more importantly, decided to embark on what came "naturally" to them in an alternate lifesyle. Together they sought to fulfill their highly charged sex lives by completely dominating "the interns". This is a continuing story from the viewpoint of those with a dominant personality as well as those with a submissive personality. Whatever your sexual orientation, be it "dominant" or "submissive," the author attempts to take you on a journey you won't soon forget. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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Jytte
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Jan 26, 2009 |
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I love that story (10/10)
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whoremaster
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Jan 22, 2009 |
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Just outstanding story of a girl being utterly domesticated. If ever completely completed this one defiantly deserves publication. (10/10)
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fullcycle
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Mar 14, 2005 |
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Hits all the right buttons. A great femdom tale. The inventiveness is its greatest strength. (10/10)
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Grafitti
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Mar 5, 2005 |
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Hi
I submitted a review last week and did not see it listed,so I will do so again.Power exchange stories are awesome,and this is in my all time top 5.The only thing keeping me from rating this story a 10,is that hopefully it will get better,if that is possible. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
DocilePet
(Edit) (Aug 17, 2004)
- Hi Grafitti...thank you for your kind words and review. Hope to someday earn that rating of 10! Again thanks for taking the time to review "The Interns."
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Abe Froman
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Sep 8, 2004 |
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Wonderfully detailed and erotic. Excellent work. Do yourself a favor and take the time to read it. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
DocilePet
(Edit) (Sep 13, 2004)
- Hi Abe...please forgive me for my late reply to your review. Believe me, it is very much appreciated. i've been traveling and very, very busy the last few months. Much more than usual. Alas, that leaves very little time for writing (my passion). Hope it slows down soon to i can get back to my story. Again thank you so much for taking the time to review "The Interns." Sincerely, Docilepet.
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slaveneedledick
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Aug 7, 2004 |
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great story. Excellent addition in chapter 16. Inquiring minds wnat to know if we have heard the last of David or is he about to become another player in the story?? Again excellent addition keep up the great work. (9/10)
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DocilePet
(Edit) (Jul 27, 2004)
- Sorry for the delay in replying to your review. Thank you very much for taking the time to review my story. i have been very busy lately but hope to continue the story of 'The Interns' soon.
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julie les
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Jul 9, 2004 |
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thank you for continuing this tale. Each time I think you have reached the peak you find a new delight. THANK YOU
Julie (10/10)
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DocilePet
(Edit) (Jul 12, 2004)
- Hi julie les...thanks millions for first, taking the time to write a review concening "The Interns" and second, for your very kind rating of five stars. i hope to get back to writing as soon as things slow down here a little bit.
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thehuntedone
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Apr 27, 2004 |
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I love the behaviour modification in this story, my first love is humiliation (which doesn't really gel with BM), but I am engrossed nonetheless. I love the degrading dialogue re-enforcing the slaves' position even after they totally accept it. I'd love to see more posture training and please keep up the orders and corrections. Waiting for more. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
DocilePet
(Edit) (Apr 29, 2004)
- Thanks for taking the time to review "The Interns." I am deeply encouraged by your words of appreciation and always welcome suggestions. Hope to continue writing as time permits. Again, thank you!
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charly
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Apr 7, 2004 |
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finally someone wrote the story that i was waiting for.
thank you. who ever you are.
i hope you continue your writing and make this kind of credible characters and plot.
bye (10/10)
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- Replied by:
DocilePet
(Edit) (Apr 10, 2004)
- Thank you so much for your review of "The Interns." I want you to know that I definitely appreciate your input, comments, and for taking the time to e-mail me. Especially want to thank you for the five stars...Wow!
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kittenfemme
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Apr 5, 2004 |
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Wow, how have I missed this little gem? It\'s a wonderfully delicious tail *ahem* tale and fairly well done to boot. I wish there was a way to subscribe to stories on this site. If there was, this would be one of my subscriptions. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
DocilePet
(Edit) (Apr 7, 2004)
- Hi kittenfemme...thank you, thank you, thank you! While i am fairly new to bdsmlibrary, i do view different forums as time permits. i see and read your postings, along with other "regulars" so i am not only pleased to hear from you but also value your opinions. Again, thank you very much....DocilePet!
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subsandyha
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Mar 2, 2004 |
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I havent seen this story, or may be i missed the last chatpter, but when I down loaded it till this last posted chapter( Chapter 6 ) I couldn't stop reading it. It trully captures both the great domince of the Mistresses and the humiliating submissions of the slaves. One of the best, if not the best, interacial BDSM stories I've read. Kept me nice and wet and I await the next installment of this highly compelling tale. KEEP IT UP DocilePet, I cant see any faults in your work, but then im not really an experience critic but your story has captured me completly. :) (10/10)
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DocilePet
(Edit) (Mar 8, 2004)
- Thank you very much for your great review. i am also glad you are enjoying this tale. i have been traveling the last few weeks and haven't had much time to spend on writing but hope to get back to writing soon. Again, thank you very much and enjoy!
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snippet
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Mar 1, 2004 |
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I agree with ms2bused on the author's nice touche with women. I love the way this story starts and continues to build. (10/10)
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DocilePet
(Edit) (Mar 8, 2004)
- Thank you so much for taking the time to review "The Interns." Time has been "short" the last week or so but hope to get back to writing soon.
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arobert29
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Feb 12, 2004 |
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Outstanding story. I love the detail. Could be a bit more sex, but the story is so well written it s ok either way. (8/10)
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DocilePet
(Edit) (Feb 15, 2004)
- Thank you for your kind words and for taking the time to review "The Interns." Hope you enjoy the coming chapters as they get a little more "involved." Again, thank you.
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e.e. norcod
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Feb 10, 2004 |
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Had to wait a while to review this one because many stories start off in a promising fashion but then degenerate into imbecility. "The Interns" seems to be maintaining it promise and could develop into a truly "classic" story. Writing a story with four major characters is a challenge and so far the writer seems up to the task. Suggestions include further emphasis on local color (e.g. the description of the building in Chapter 1 was excellant)and a fuller development of the motivations for the two dominants. The submissives are scrumptious and the Rev. Norcod hopes that there is lots of corporal punishment in store for them. If these slaves are properly chastised, this reviewer will be impelled to raise his rating. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
DocilePet
(Edit) (Feb 10, 2004)
- Thank you for your review. i am always deeply appreciative for suggestions. This my first attempt at multiple characters and yes, you are correct, it is challenging. i have always attempted to let the story "come alive" as it goes. i also really dislike submitting chapters in segments and would normally prefer to wait until the story is completed. But this story is based on the life of a truly wonderful "lifestyle" dominant lady that i have known for a long time and she preferred it that way. Again, thank you very much. Hope you enjoy the coming chapters.
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belladonna
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Feb 5, 2004 |
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i can't wait for the next chapters to come. (9/10)
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DocilePet
(Edit) (Feb 5, 2004)
- Thank you for taking the time to review "The Interns"..wish i had more time to review but, alas, time goes too darn fast! Again thank you so much!
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ms2bused
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Feb 1, 2004 |
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Though this author is admittedly a male, I think he does a truly fantastic job of characterizing all the female written of and responding as usually only a woman could! The story is, in my estimation, enormously erotic! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
DocilePet
(Edit) (Feb 3, 2004)
- Apologies for my late reply...thank you for your kind words and great review...enjoy! Love, not War!
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jbowler65
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Jan 30, 2004 |
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Good start. Looking forward to seeing where this one is heading. (7/10)
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DocilePet
(Edit) (Feb 4, 2004)
- Again...apologies for the late reply...thanks for the review...
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woolfighter
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Jan 29, 2004 |
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Great. I've enjoyed it with all my heart. keep it up and don't lose that timing. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
DocilePet
(Edit) (Feb 4, 2004)
- Thanks for your review...deeply appreciate it...
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nibnob
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Jan 28, 2004 |
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I look fiorward to the rest (7/10)
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- Replied by:
DocilePet
(Edit) (Feb 4, 2004)
- Thank you for taking the time to review my story...wish I had more time to do some reviewing myself...
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redEva
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Jan 27, 2004 |
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easy to read and interesting. i, personally, am very interested in what kind of modification cruel Mistress has in mind :) (7/10)
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- Replied by:
DocilePet
(Edit) (Feb 4, 2004)
- Hi redEva...thanks for taking the time to review my contribution...hope to hear from you again....
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| Reviewer:
bdsmbill
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Jan 27, 2004 |
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As this one gets going, I expect that I may have to raise my rating. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
DocilePet
(Edit) (Feb 4, 2004)
- Thanks for your reply...sorry for replying back so late...alas, been too darn busy to get on line much...
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