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A Slut In Hand
Author: Romeo
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(Added on Feb 16, 2004)
(This month 18320 readers) (Total 46288 readers) |
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My friend comes for dinner, sees my obedient, slut/slave wife and wants his young, sexy wife to be trained as a good slut. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
| Average
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
woolfighter
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Jun 24, 2006 |
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The story is great, it should go on... (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Mar 2, 2004 |
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it was a good read, nothing great, nothing terrible, just slightly above average (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
mastertharo
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Feb 19, 2004 |
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Its good. Thats all i can say keep the writting up (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Master_chris
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Feb 19, 2004 |
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great start, I would love to see the doll, training in all manner of things, from serving to demostration her new skills in public (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Lady Blade
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Feb 18, 2004 |
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Romeo, I don't normally give a bad rating to anything, so I'm hoping you will take this constructively instead of personally. Please go back and edit your stories. You have a good plot to work with, but it's spoiled when one is being consistently interrupted by bad grammar, bad spelling and thin characters. Work on the first two and then develop your characters a little more. Hope that helps. Lady Blade (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
bdsmbill
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Feb 18, 2004 |
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I pretty well written little tale. The justification for how quickly he controls the new girl is a little thin, but it's otherwise OK. (7/10)
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bikinkgirl
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Feb 18, 2004 |
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Delicious reading (7/10)
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