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Rosemary Waited
Author: Subher
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(Added on Feb 20, 2004)
(This month 21466 readers) (Total 43312 readers) |
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She'll do anything for her overlord. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
teamster
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Mar 7, 2004 |
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some mistakes in grammar and spelling, also it gets a bit redundant calling them slave and master through the whole story, once youve established their relationship. to me, the thing that makes a story exciting is a sense of suspense, not just a litany of punishments. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
kaleun76
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Feb 25, 2004 |
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Very good story. The grammar is a bit off, but it is still entertaining.
I hope more stories are in the way (8/10)
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