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The Stranger
Author: Boomer
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(Added on Feb 27, 2004)
(This month 37428 readers) (Total 54731 readers) |
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Black woman raped by stranger. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
CarolinaSpkr
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Oct 8, 2004 |
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Would have liked to see the stranger fuck her in the ass. You teased the reader, but it never happened. Also when you spank hard adark skin black ass it mottles with white blisters abd a dark burgundy red color. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
teamster
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Mar 7, 2004 |
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i like the level of detail in the beginning and you create a fairly believable character. the action that comes later becomes a little repetitive, you should try not to describe the same things or events in the same way every time. for instance, there must be a hundred other words for 'pussy'. (6/10)
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- Replied by:
boomerez41
(Edit) (Mar 7, 2004)
- Thanks for your reply. Those are the kinds of comments I am looking for. This is only my second story and I am trying to get the gist of writing. I will remember that for my next story.
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