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A Day With The Doctor
Author: davidBeck
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(Added on Mar 6, 2004)
(This month 13014 readers) (Total 39203 readers) |
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Jane and david vist a sex therepist. The day doesn't turn out quite as planned. |
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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
Average
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jip
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Feb 27, 2006 |
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Wud like to go to theat doctor aswell! Good sexual description, exiting. Some more therapy in another story would be welcome.
Jezus why some people are only looking at grammar? This is not a literary contest. It is written for pleasure. (8/10)
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grrarrgh
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Nov 22, 2004 |
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sequel! (8/10)
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whrtafe
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Mar 18, 2004 |
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Well written short story, enjoyable (9/10)
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bracemaiden
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Mar 9, 2004 |
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A reasonably written plot with legible grammar. It could have had more detail, but not bad.
Unlike mkemse, I did not have as much of an issue with the "spelling, grammaer ect." (6/10)
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arobert29
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Mar 9, 2004 |
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This could be the beginning of a really good story. The grammer is very poor and needs to be improved. (5/10)
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jbowler65
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Mar 8, 2004 |
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Great premise. Unfortunately, the grammar was awful. (4/10)
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teamster
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Mar 7, 2004 |
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the grammar and syntax didnt bother me all that much but if youre going to do a medical scene there is so much more equipment you could have used. also, if youre going to give your subs injections why not put them where theyll do the most good, like in the sex organs. check out bmezine sometime. theres a lot of needle freaks out there., (4/10)
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mkemse
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Mar 6, 2004 |
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i will let the rating speak for itself, when you post any story you have to make it readable, spelling, grammaer ect. if need be have someone proff read it for you (3/10)
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lex ludite
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Mar 6, 2004 |
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A delightful concept totally ruined by grammar that borders on the absurd, ludicrous spelling, tense changes that make no sense, and a host of other deficiencies in editing that made enjoying this story nearly impossible. My rating does not follow the suggested guidelines. (3/10)
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