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Weighed
Average (?):  (3.5/10) |
| Average
Rating: (3.5/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
(Edit) |
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Apr 3, 2007 |
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very poorly written, just not a good sotry or job on the story (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
crickette
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Apr 27, 2005 |
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For the 1st time, I actually read the other reviews before making my own. I only read them afterwards because of simple curiosity.
I too believe the wtiter is not a native english speaker but that does not mean that she cannot write. I liked the plot of the story. She did her job. She did exactly what she was suppossd to do. Make sure the submissive knew who was in charge. I thought the regret she expressed as well as the necessity for what she had to do was also a nice touch.
Some of the othe reviewers were true when they said a proof-reader could have been of great help or maybe simply help from someone who was more fluent in English. I do not agree that the story was extremely hard to follow or made no sense. It was a classic f/m dom story. The main issue I found was grammar and some spelling. Being a hopelss romantic, I loved the ending.
With time the wrier's grammar will probably improve but I think he or she did pretty good with what they had. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Cokera
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Dec 8, 2004 |
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Really not a good read. Much work and a good spell checker would probably not help. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
Faibhar
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Mar 21, 2004 |
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Most previous reader/reviewers have speculated that English must not be Indiandomme's first langauge which leads to a facile explaination for the singular syntax. Possible other reasons could be an attack of PMS at the time of writing, stream of consciousness of the illterate mind, or who knows? One can only hope, however, that if "D.P.O.D." is based on real life, then safer and more understandable methods are employed. (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
bracemaiden
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Mar 19, 2004 |
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I believe that "mediocre with barely acceptable grammar" is a fitting description. Many aspects, such as the shortening of short words (such as "you" becoming just "u") makes Indiandomme's writing style annoying.
You win some, you lose some... (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
trainmanretep
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Mar 18, 2004 |
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I'm giving a three because I guess English is not your first language, otherwise it would have been a 1+ or maybe a 2 at max. (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Mar 18, 2004 |
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This little story has so many imperfections it's not worth ennumerating them. I 'm not perfectly clear about the ending, but I think it has something to do with personal revelation. Unfortunately the author has bitten off way more than he or she can chew. By the way, for your information, repeating the title does not pass for a synopsis. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
bdsmbill
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Mar 16, 2004 |
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This was a difficult story to review, since it doesn't appear that the author is a native speaker of English. Perhaps the author should find someone to proofread the work. (6/10)
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