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Under The Hood
Author: Night Owl
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(Added on Mar 15, 2004)
(This month 13769 readers) (Total 28030 readers) |
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Consumed by guilt, the narrator tells his story about how an empty tank of gas on a lonely road led to his involvement in a woman's abduction. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
bisarah
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Mar 13, 2005 |
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this was a very well-written story that certainly kept this reader's attention. any chance of there being more added? what happened to the girl? (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Sally J
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Feb 22, 2005 |
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Very memorable...sadistic, but cute - is that possible? (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
janie
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May 1, 2004 |
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Well written. Disturbing. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Mar 22, 2004 |
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The story itself was good. There were a lot of misspellings that a spellcheck program should've caught. Also, without giving away the story, I had a problem with some of the logistics (based on how the woman was standing, I don't think her breasts would've been near any moving parts). I'm surprised lex hasn't reviewed this one, because it's the kind of original, creative story that he's always looking for. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
bdsmbill
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Mar 18, 2004 |
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Nicely done story, with a unique twist. (8/10)
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