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The Goon Show
Author: Freddie Clegg
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(Added on Mar 18, 2004)
(This month 13153 readers) (Total 23837 readers) |
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One of the heavies in a kidnap and slaving gang give his perspective on life as one of the goons. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8.5/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Oct 6, 2010 |
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I would have gone for a fat niner, but added some scraps of a point because of the songtitles (or derivations from) used for the subchapters titles (Hollies, Animals, etc. ... and "The End" is from The Doors. Well, maybe not that one).
"The Goon Show" is a treat to read. Besides of the great recollection-style musings of The Goon, this is a blue-print of a "Things To remember When Handling A Freshly Kindnapped Goil" pocketbook.
Not praying to Freddie, I said in an earlier review. Sure, but I'm in the process of building a shrine nevertheless...
JJ (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Nov 16, 2008 |
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most if not all of your stories are good (9/10)
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- Replied by:
freddie_clegg
(Edit) (Nov 18, 2008)
- Thanks, mkemse.
Glad you enjoyed it
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| Reviewer:
Jaeger
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May 29, 2006 |
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Very entertaining. Not every story on this site needs to be packed with sex and pain, do they? (9/10)
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- Replied by:
freddie_clegg
(Edit) (May 30, 2006)
- Thanks, Jaeger.
If you haven't seen it try my story "Market Forces" which carries on in a similar vein but from a different perspective.
I have a half-written sequel to this one which I may get around to working on again one day.
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| Reviewer:
Harold
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Mar 22, 2004 |
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I agree with the other reviewers as to the faults of this story, mainly that it needs a little more sex and some cp, but I give it extra points for originality, cleverness, and, of course, execution (which are, in my opinion, to be preferred to a few hackneyed sex scenes). Well done. Throw in a sequel with a bit of attention to the missing elements and you've got a 10. (9/10)
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e.e. norcod
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Mar 21, 2004 |
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Personally, I was hoping for Harry Seacomb, Peter Sellers and and Alec Guiness but I suspect that allusion is a little too much. Actually, I thought the whole thing rather clever myself. You have generated some insight and given us some interesting characters. The question is, now what are you going to do with them. You can always add subsequent chapters! If you heed the advice of my fellow reviewers you can add a little sex (or a lot of very perverse sex). I personally would like to see some severe corporal punishment of these females. Who knows, the collective rating for this story might rise considerably. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Harold
(Edit) (Mar 22, 2004)
- What about Spike Milligan?
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| Reviewer:
Powerone
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Mar 20, 2004 |
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I like my erotica with some sex in it. This story was so full of opportunities, but all were missed. Became more of a fiction story (or maybe non-fiction, who knows) then erotica.
(6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Moggy
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Mar 19, 2004 |
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I enjoyed this wry tale of a henchman's lot, and agree with Freddie they deserve more respect for the vital role they perform. This is an amusing tale, though perhaps too episodic. Although the abduction bondage is good, I felt the erotic quotient could have been cranked up a notch or too. (8/10)
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