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The Rod
Author: James Lakes
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(Added on Mar 18, 2004)
(This month 9110 readers) (Total 17931 readers) |
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Michael felt that his submissive lover was perhaps trying to control him by 'topping from the bottom'. He is determined to get her back on track and understand the error of her ways. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
crimson
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Mar 23, 2004 |
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I loved the plot and the scene as it unfolded. I felt, though, a bit distant from the characters - something was happening, but it wasn't really pulling me in. I needed to *feel* each strike. More description of emotions and facial expressions might have remedied this. Great story, though - definitely walked away having learned valuable lessons! Well done! (7/10)
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e.e. norcod
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Mar 20, 2004 |
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I will go lex one better, I think this story is an eight. Yes, extra points are given for the lucite rod but I think that there was significant novelty to the plot as well and a neat little twist and puzzlement at the end. I can even see lex "lucite" ludite using the 'rod' in one of his next stories.
Why not a nine or a ten. Frankly I thought that there could be a greater discriptive effort at the vocal and physical reactions of the sub.
Looking forward to your next posting on this site. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
jameslakes
(Edit) (Mar 22, 2004)
- As this was my first posting, I certainly appreciate that you took the time to give me such constructive critcism. Thank you, James
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Mar 19, 2004 |
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Not bad, not bad at all; in fact pretty darn good. I am sure that certain people are already taking notes and figuring how to work that neat Lucite whip into their stories. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
jameslakes
(Edit) (Mar 22, 2004)
- As this was my first effort in writing let me thank you for taking the time to review and give me your valuable comments. They are appreciated. James
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