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Passenger Train
Author: crimson
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(Added on Mar 25, 2004)
(This month 16274 readers) (Total 45280 readers) |
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Passenger Train |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (9/10) |
Average
Rating:  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 23, 2009 |
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Although well written, I found the idea a tad far fetched.
JJ (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Breathless
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Aug 3, 2005 |
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This is an amazingly well written piece, with great descriptions of both the place and the people. The sex is HOT HOT HOT (and not just because of the IcyHot Heath is using!)
I loved this story when I first saw it on another site, and don't believe I commented on it at that time only because I was so new that I didn't know what to say. I'm now officially addicted and much more aware of which stories are worthy and which are not. Crimson, you are amazing and I can't wait for the next chapter of this one. (10/10)
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Ruby
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Oct 22, 2004 |
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Crimson, your fans are waiting for more.
Please keep it going!
I gave this a 9 cause it's not finished. (9/10)
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myri_SN
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Oct 3, 2004 |
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I loved this story and since waiting for updates. (10/10)
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mkemse
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Aug 18, 2004 |
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so far so good like to see where you go next (9/10)
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littleslut
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Jun 30, 2004 |
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wow keep it up!! (10/10)
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bracemaiden
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Apr 1, 2004 |
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The writing style is excellent, and the story is wonderfully creative - a lot of sexual tension without the extreme sadisticness found in many others of this type - looking forward to part 2, hopefully with more about that corset! (10/10)
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dark dreams
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Mar 29, 2004 |
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This was incredibly well written and very sensual, showing a very obvious portrayal of a firm yet caring Dom with a feisty sub!
Absolutely brilliant - more please!!! (10/10)
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kittenfemme
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Mar 27, 2004 |
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My only complaint is over the formatting. I had a difficult time telling where paragraphs ended and a new one began. Please consider double spacing paragraphs? That aside, I love how you've managed the setting so far crimson. More please? (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mica
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Mar 27, 2004 |
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love this story please continue, it's what I look for in a story
(10/10)
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jbowler65
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Mar 27, 2004 |
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Great story with great details that leave you wanting more. (9/10)
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chksng19
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Mar 26, 2004 |
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Good stuff, crimson. Interesting development, some nice ideas for control, and a "page-turner" style that holds the interest. Anxious to see more! (9/10)
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nova
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Mar 25, 2004 |
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See!!! i *told* you this was one of your best. Maybe you'll listen to me occasionally...
Anyway, you only get a 9, cos you still haven't finished it :p (9/10)
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- Replied by:
crimson
(Edit) (Mar 26, 2004)
- And as you know, darling nova... this one is, has been, and always will be, dedicated and written solely for you!
*kisses and hugs and all that jazz*
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Faibhar
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Mar 25, 2004 |
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Choo, chooo! Amtrak coud take some marketing lessons from this fictional train. Regardless, "P.T." makes getting there half of the fun. (8/10)
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e.e. norcod
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Mar 25, 2004 |
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This may be the best thing that crimson has written to date. Readers will have to sample the author's other stories and form their own opinion. crimson takes a common theme, abduction of a college co-ed and sets it in an unusual venue, a train. Then the author very carefully developes the story. If the story improves as it goes I will have to revise my review upwards. (8/10)
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GaryWilcox
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Mar 25, 2004 |
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I am not a huge fan of 'dandy doms', but I enjoyed this much, and I look forward to the rest. (8/10)
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