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The Virtue of Patience
Author: Captv8td
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(Added on Mar 30, 2004)
(This month 129660 readers) (Total 186218 readers) |
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Patience's boyfriend had a losing streak at the gambling tables in Las Vegas. To cover his bet, he wagered his girlfriend. He lost. |
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Average (?):  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
CATRMR369
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May 7, 2015 |
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Absolutely Loved It! Please write more?!? Pretty Please! (10/10)
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Dryhill
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May 25, 2011 |
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It was only on the second reading of this story that i realised that i had not rated or commented on it. Like all Captv8td stories one has to accept that you have entered some form of alternative universe/ fantasy land, where nubile young ladies become slaves to just about anyone.
i first read this story about fifteen months ago when it was missing the final chapter and thought it an excellent piece of fiction. It however has been improved with the final chapter which gives us a nice happy ending which is also something of a trade mark of our dear author.
A well deserved ten and a hearty thank you for such an enjoyable read. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Dec 6, 2010 |
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A kind of "Indecent Proposal" with a much harder edge and a far more serious twist, "The Virtue Of Patience" is thus far among the best that I've read from Captv8td, both on the characterization as on the storytelling front.
Although it has been six and a half years in the making, the 'closing' chapter isn't out of sync with what came before. It feels like that chapter was written about the same time as the rest, but somehow got overlooked and never was added. Until now, that is.
Great stuff.
JJ (10/10)
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msilsby
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Aug 29, 2007 |
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Great story. Always a pleasure to read this authors work. (10/10)
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jth215
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Aug 1, 2004 |
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Great story, can't wait for the next chapter.
Thanks (9/10)
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Smel18
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Apr 15, 2004 |
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Can't wait to read the rest! This is a great story! (9/10)
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aztec
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Apr 8, 2004 |
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Wow! Another awesome story. Can\'t wait to see more. (10/10)
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Wmnwholves
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Apr 6, 2004 |
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Very well done... I love the tie in to Princess Alana... Hope to see more chapters (9/10)
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kittenfemme
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Apr 4, 2004 |
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Well done. I can\'t wait for more! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
jbowler65
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Apr 2, 2004 |
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Wonderfully detailed story. We love it. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mobius
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Apr 2, 2004 |
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I loved this story and look forward to the rest. It has all the things that I look for in a good story Dom F and NC f love it
thanks from and admirer (10/10)
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e.e. norcod
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Mar 31, 2004 |
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A classical story of abduction and slave training but exceptionally well written. Chapter 1 is well worth reading on it own simply for its lyricism. In many ways, although the characters are different, this story takes off where Princess Alana ended. Therefore if you loved that story (as thousands did) you are likely to love this one. (9/10)
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chksng19
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Mar 30, 2004 |
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Beautiful start. Story holds the attention even though the theme is familiar. Well written, keeps the reader moving forward. Looking forward to story additions! (9/10)
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