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Kryztal
Author: Carmenica Diaz
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(Added on Apr 2, 2004)
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Caroline and Hal Blaine lived in a perfect world of Hollywood glamour and wealth until an enemy told Caroline about Hal's dirty little secret. Disgusted and intrigued, Caroline had to know more. And then, she met Kryztal. |
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Panther007
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I really enjoyed your story, great characters and hot and nasty action. Humiliation and bondage in stories always thrill me. Sad to see that you never continued with the remaining chapters. (9/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jan 23, 2009 |
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Has its ups and downs, but overall I found this to be an excellent tale. A pity it isn't finished yet...
JJ (9/10)
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fidzilla
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Only downside is the promise of more at the end of chapter 4 and then having no updates in a while. (9/10)
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kevin666
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Aug 14, 2005 |
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Loved the first 4 parts. The characters are very believable and the direction the plot appears to be going is very promising. This is the type of story I love. Thanks Carmenica for a great read. (10/10)
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Borborad
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Jun 7, 2005 |
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Loved it, waiting fr the next part(S) :-) (10/10)
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Wmnwholves
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Apr 25, 2004 |
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I can't wait for the next part. Great story and great pace of the story. Keep up the good work. (9/10)
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teamster
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Apr 24, 2004 |
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An interesting double-bind sort of situation... well plotted. What other twists do you have in store for us? (9/10)
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pechho
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Apr 24, 2004 |
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Great stuff. Can't wait for the next part! (9/10)
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crickette
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I loved reading Krystal. I loved the pace of the story. It kept you involved and waiting for what was next. I am definately looking forward to the next installment. (9/10)
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lex ludite
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Apr 13, 2004 |
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An outstanding opening that pushes all the right buttons as far as this reader is concerned. The writing style is most impressive. I look forward to the further adventures of Kryztal and her "friends".After reading three chapters, it's hard to believe that there is still much more to come, but here's hoping. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
castle2001
(Edit) (Apr 5, 2004)
- Your writing is good too.
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| Reviewer:
jbowler65
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Apr 13, 2004 |
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Very good story with some twists. Now that Hal knows, we look forward to find out what future surprises the author will spring on poor Kryztal. (10/10)
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Roamer
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Apr 5, 2004 |
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I thought Part 1 was good but Part 2 shows this author has a few tricks up the sleeve. Very well written and the characters are painted well.<br>Is this a long story? I waiting for the developments. Very good and one of the quality stories on this site.
Added: This author has only two stories on this site and yet the writing skills exhibited here are not those of a new 'first time' author - very professional. (10/10)
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castle2001
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Apr 5, 2004 |
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Strong plot with good possibilities for future development.
Part 2 keeps giong in good directions. (9/10)
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mkemse
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Apr 4, 2004 |
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ok but nothing spectacular (7/10)
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esclavadana
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Apr 3, 2004 |
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Interesting promising part 1. Please tell us more! (8/10)
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