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Earning His Mark
Author: kira9871
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(Added on Apr 8, 2004)
(This month 10877 readers) (Total 22524 readers) |
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A slave will do anything to prove to Master she is his whore. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
bambipaige
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Apr 23, 2004 |
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Really loved your story - pretty well written and how well you covered her emotionis makes the story stand out. (8/10)
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WackySpurtz
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Apr 14, 2004 |
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Average story, average writig, average rating. I would be nice to have some more zing in the next one. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
deepbluemm
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Apr 11, 2004 |
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Mmmmm, this is the kind of love that transports us to the heights! Well done kira. Love your mind and the way that you have woven the words together in this beautiful gift. (8/10)
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chksng19
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Apr 9, 2004 |
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Good and well-written story; I guess it goes against my personal standards a little, as I was uncomfortable with the way he treated her. Very good "walk through her emotions", though might have gotten a little deeper into HIS emotions. (8/10)
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mkemse
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Apr 9, 2004 |
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it was good, but i have seem alot of stories, similar story line where the slave tries to please the master, i guess from her view point it made it more enjoyable (8/10)
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tiemup2001
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Apr 8, 2004 |
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liked the detail of her feelings of being used and humiliated. Thanks (7/10)
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