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Thrilling Rape Fantasies - Illustrated
Author: teamster
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(Added on Apr 11, 2004)
(This month 111109 readers) (Total 256416 readers) |
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Repressed and manipulative Alison discovers a side of herself she didn't know existed. Unknown to her, her life is already being controlled by sinister forces. This is just the first chapter of a much longer work. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (8.5/10) |
Average
Rating: (8.5/10) |
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Rating: (7/10) |
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Reviewer:
Lydia
(Edit) |
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May 9, 2006 |
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I like it, I enjoy it, I just canīt finish reading this story! I would like to be at the place of Alison and make all her experiences! I look forward to the next parts an I cannot expect them! (10/10)
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Reviewer:
H Dean
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Mar 1, 2006 |
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Told as if an individual were relating it to friends, this story had some very positive aspects. Unfortunately, it was a bit difficult to read due to grammatical and formatting issues. Had this story undergone an edit by someone who was not the author, I imagine it would have flowed much better (An objective reader always helps). In fact, it was the technical errors which brought my score to only a 7. This is one time I wish there were seperate scoring options for rating stories. If so, this would receive a 9 for the story and a 5 for technical issues. Good stuff, overall. (7/10)
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Reviewer:
rolf palsy
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Aug 22, 2005 |
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Absolutely great stuff! Love the gory details and the various indignities that the heroine suffers. The illustrations are excellent and do add to the story. Will be sure to keep an eye out for the next installment (9/10)
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- Replied by:
teamster
(Edit) (Aug 23, 2005)
- thanks rolf... a second book is now in the works but may take some time...
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Reviewer:
jeanne
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Aug 19, 2005 |
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The last chapters are every bit as hot and wicked as the previous ones... And yes, I'll stay tuned for the sequel! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
teamster
(Edit) (Aug 19, 2005)
- thanks jeanne... it took a while but at least I got this first book done and have actually started rewriting the sequel. glad you enjoyed it. love and kisses.
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Reviewer:
Macuss
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Sep 9, 2004 |
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Great!...Loved it so far. Would like to see more Leroy in the future. Only downside so far is the time between the 5th chapter and the newest, but people do have lives to lead (9/10)
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- Replied by:
teamster
(Edit) (Sep 9, 2004)
- thanks for the encouraging words. I sent in the first five chapers over a one month period when I was recuperating from a broken rib. Now that I'm back at work its been hard to find time for this, but getting a positive review every once in a while helps to keep me motivated.
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Reviewer:
jbowler65
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May 2, 2004 |
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Very interesting story. We hope to see Leroy involve some more in the future chapters. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
teamster
(Edit) (May 2, 2004)
- Thanks. Leroy and his homies will be returning to visit Alison one of these days. Just imagine all the fun they could have.
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Reviewer:
BrazenBitch
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Apr 17, 2004 |
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nasty, but in a good way! (7/10)
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Reviewer:
WackySpurtz
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Apr 14, 2004 |
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Alison vs Leroy in a most beautiful love story! Actually the story was pretty damn silly, whih was its saving grace. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
teamster
(Edit) (Apr 14, 2004)
- hmm... a curious reaction
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Reviewer:
gina
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Apr 12, 2004 |
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Wow! Was rather violent, but its just fiction, so its ok. i liked it a lot! Will there be anymore? ;) (8/10)
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- Replied by:
teamster
(Edit) (Apr 14, 2004)
- Thank you Gina..yes there's lots more coming. but this is seriously hardcore stuff, so if you're squeamish, better turn away. The way I felt about it, if you're going to write a fantasy, you might as well take it as far as it will go!
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