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Pool Girl
Author: C. Lakewood
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(Added on Apr 15, 2004)
(This month 19306 readers) (Total 44622 readers) |
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A 30-something female, formerly a college professor, but now unemployed and depressed, falls under the influence of an 18-year-old girl. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Martiniman
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Jan 23, 2012 |
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Short but very well done! (9/10)
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Dryhill
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Jan 30, 2011 |
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I agree with both points raised by "camden" a little more resistance and how about another chapter? (8/10)
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BigCat
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Jul 26, 2005 |
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A very well written short hot story. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
camden
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Jan 16, 2005 |
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Very erotic but just a little too short. More resistance on older woman's partwould be interesting. (9/10)
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mkemse
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Jun 25, 2004 |
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was a good read (7/10)
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kittenfemme
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Apr 27, 2004 |
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This was a very cute story. It was refreshing to read someone describe a lady's shrewd mind before her body. Likewise, I was glad to read a woman with smallish breasts portrayed in such a sexy manner. Well done! (8/10)
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jbowler65
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Apr 24, 2004 |
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Wonderful short story. Nicely written with enough description to draw you in. (10/10)
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BrazenBitch
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Apr 17, 2004 |
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a nice little story. hope to see more. (7/10)
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lex ludite
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Apr 16, 2004 |
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I thoroughly enjoyed this very well constructed tale that artfully displays the writer's talents which are many including a delightful command of the language, very well drawn characters and a plot that has just enough of a twist to separate itself from the vast majority of stories that try to cover the same ground. My rating assumes that it is what it is, an excellent example of how to write a short, short story (10/10)
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Wmnwholves
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Apr 16, 2004 |
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Great story... Loved the characters... would love to see them together in another story... (9/10)
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buskeyTR
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Apr 15, 2004 |
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Excellent start - well written. Hopefully will continue story. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
mantis
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Apr 15, 2004 |
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Good atmosphere. Good characterisation. (9/10)
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