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Allene's Spanking
Author: Allene Blake
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(Added on Apr 5, 2001)
(This month 18284 readers) (Total 39657 readers) |
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The girl caught in bikini by conservative parents is taken to woodshed for a whupping add boys watch through knotholes. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 21, 2009 |
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Nevermind Neopadinski here, cuz the man must have had a bad day when he wrote his little rant. Because, let's face it, this here little tale is very well written.
I mean, why would a reader decide how the characters in one's story should think?
They behave like the author wants them to behave, and if that behaviour beats some kind of logic, it is the author's perogative to let the characters do so.
I myself found nothing wrong with anything whatsoever.
Great little story!
JJ (9/10)
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Neopadinski
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Oct 18, 2003 |
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I really didn't care much for this story. I mean, would a parent that freaks out (about a bikini) really tell all the neighbors about how they are about to whip their attractive daughter, THEN make her go out in just a bra and panties into a woodshed, tie her down, and spank her? What I don't understand is why her father cut off her bra and panties at the end-I mean, he freaked out about a bikini, and now he's stripping the rest of her clothes off? Sure, it's a good idea-unfortunately, it subtracts from the quality of the character development, because the author is trying to get several sexual concepts into a single story. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
rcb
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Feb 27, 2003 |
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engaging story (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Silverfish
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Apr 12, 2001 |
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Typical of Allene's writing it was strong in the humilation segments, with just a hint of orgasm control (the girl is forbidden from touching herself). It's not a particularly engaging story, and I found it less then realistic or believable.
Not Allene's worst work, but certainly not her best. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
sean halpin |
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Apr 9, 2001 |
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brillent (10/10)
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