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Dress For Less
Author: sig
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(Added on Apr 19, 2004)
(This month 16093 readers) (Total 39570 readers) |
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A bored wife rediscovers her dominant lesbian nature and uses it to save her marriage. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Yoru
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Dec 1, 2004 |
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A promising story. I enjoyed it... (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
kittenfemme
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Apr 27, 2004 |
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Ack! The dialogue as bulleted lists was maddening! I've read that it wasn't originally written as such but that perhaps some posting/ document translation problem caused it. Please have it fixed or resubmit the story in plain text. I think that the story itself shows promise though. Will it be continued? (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
jbowler65
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Apr 24, 2004 |
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Very enjoyable story despite the dots :) (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Sig
(Edit) (Apr 24, 2004)
- Thanks for your review. In the original .doc file the dialogue is indicated by quotation marks. I don't know where the dots come from.
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| Reviewer:
Faibhar
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Apr 23, 2004 |
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The hole (sic) night. Brings back fond memories as will this story entertain. Aside from the unnerving dots used in place of quotation marks, the pace is consistent and lends credence to the protagonist's thinking. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Sig
(Edit) (Apr 24, 2004)
- Thanks for the review. I am well aware of the grammar and sintax errors on the story. The fact is english is my third language. I don't even live in an english speaking country, but I'll try to improve in the updates.
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| Reviewer:
ms2bused
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Apr 20, 2004 |
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I know you are probably a man, but your skill in interpreting the possible devious mind of a dominant, and controlling woman is to be honored! As I am a submissive lesbian myself, I found myself interacting with the submissive women in your stories and totally thrilled to it! Hoping you will have continued, and new scenario stories coming out continually! Perhaps sometime in the future you might consider a story in which the Dominatress purposely keeps her submissive on the very edge of orgasm but never allowing her to no matter how much she has that submissive pleasure her!
A new and avid fan,
neenee (JaneenMarie O'Brien) (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Sig
(Edit) (Apr 24, 2004)
- Thanks for your review. Taking the sub to the orgasm is just a way to show the power the dom has over her.
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| Reviewer:
WackySpurtz
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Apr 19, 2004 |
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Despite the uh?..feminist quality of the work, sig seems to be writing from a jailhouse cell? The toilet figures so big in this work!
<<Keeping the grip on her breasts, Kate steadily pushed Jillian until the blonde was sitting on the toilet cup with her beautiful legs completely spread. Kate released one of her breast and started unhooking the front garters.>> (4/10)
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- Replied by:
Sig
(Edit) (Apr 21, 2004)
- Thanks for your review. I just wanted to know the what you really mean when you write about the "feminist quality" of the story. Regarding the toilet size, well, I agree this one was a big one! Luckily the only jailhouse I ever been was Alcatraz Prision, but just as a tourist.
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