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Just Another Day
Author: Lord Douche
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(Added on Apr 22, 2004)
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A mechanical maid awakens in the morning, eager to serve. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
SamCurious
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Jun 4, 2011 |
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wow, chilling! beautifully described. (9/10)
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mkemse
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Apr 9, 2005 |
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Very orginal, very well written, no a big sci fi fan but when you read something like this it makes it far better to enjoy, i have read other's by you and you genenral are very consistant, this is not exception (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Lord Douche
(Edit) (Apr 9, 2005)
- Thanks mkemse :) I'm glad you liked the story. I wasn't expecting anyone to review it, it's been so long since it was posted! I was hoping for more for J2, personally :p
LD
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| Reviewer:
teamster
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Apr 24, 2004 |
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Interesting idea, and the story is well written. I have a special fondness for sci fi themes. My only complaint would be that there's not much real sex action. A day of dusting is not particularly exciting to me, although your character seems to find it rewarding. The idea of force-feeding by enema is an original one, although I"m not sure if it would work... (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Lord Douche
(Edit) (Apr 24, 2004)
- hehe. I'm not sure if it would work either, but I like it anyway ;) Thanks for the review, Teamster
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Apr 24, 2004 |
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This is something that I never thought I'd see, something more than a bit off the beaten path in this genre. My compliments to the author for this novel and extremely well done effort. For a mechanical maid, his creation displays more humanity than most of the stick figure submissives that usually populate this kind of story. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Lord Douche
(Edit) (Apr 24, 2004)
- Thanks a heap Lex! Really appreciate the review.
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julise
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Apr 22, 2004 |
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I loved the originality of this story. Great writing, good detail. Wonderful story! (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Lord Douche
(Edit) (Apr 23, 2004)
- Thanks Julsie for the review! Any particular reasons why 8/10?
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