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Slutball
Author: Omega Phallic
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(Added on Apr 26, 2004)
(This month 15431 readers) (Total 33410 readers) |
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Superheroines get kidnapped and forced to play in a depraved arena sport, which escape the prize for winning. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (2.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (1.5/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
Jennifer Rowling
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Oct 1, 2005 |
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There’s nothing interesting or even remotely erotic about your story. You don’t develop the characters, you don’t describe in detail the action, you don’t have any build up. And just writing “cock”, “cunt”, “pussy” in a story it doesn’t make an erotic one (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
jbowler65
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Apr 27, 2004 |
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A bit of a disappointment. Interesting premise, but something was just lacking. It seemed a bit rushed. (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
HellKeeper
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Apr 26, 2004 |
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I have three things to say about this story :
lame
lame
lame
I have read two stories by this author & both sucked. I won't make these mistakes again. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dododecapod
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Apr 26, 2004 |
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I couldn't even finish this Drek! Not sexy, poorly written, ZERO points for terrible grammar! (1/10)
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