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Indian Whipping
Author: Allene Blake
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(Added on Apr 5, 2001)
(This month 21583 readers) (Total 46995 readers) |
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The girl tells boyfriends her fantasy of being tortured as a spy and they make it come true. |
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Average (?):  (5/10) |
| Average
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 21, 2009 |
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Okay, so the prose may not be Pulizer material, but it's still a fun read, which in my opinion doesn't warrant a 4 score, certainly not a 1...
But hey, who am I to judge?
JJ (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
svg
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Jan 10, 2005 |
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Needed some sexual input. Keep on writing but read other writer's submisions for more graphic details etc. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
crickette
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Oct 15, 2003 |
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I liked Indian Whipping. It seemed to be rushed though. Maybe more of a lead in. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Silverfish |
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Apr 9, 2001 |
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Good story. Very short (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Xavier |
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Apr 7, 2001 |
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childish prose that puts the story forth in a very stilted and forced way (1/10)
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