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Genesis
Author: M.M.
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(Added on May 6, 2004)
(This month 13488 readers) (Total 23095 readers) |
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See how the future looks for male race...genetically engineered race. |
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Feb 8, 2006 |
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No bad. Sometimes a little slow but still worth reading (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Faibhar
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May 13, 2004 |
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Be careful for what you wish...or something like that. Anyway, this insightful slant on the future is underminded by unusual syntax. If English is not the author's first language, then he/she should first have the submission edited by an English speaking person. If this theory of English etc. is not correct, then there is no excuse for the somewhat glaring errors in grammar. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
abitbent
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May 8, 2004 |
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Although long, this one is very clumsy. I don't recall seeing any paragraphs and the author could do himself some good by using a few adjectives to describe, well almost anything. The storyline does exist, but it's presentation is very sub par. (4/10)
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