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An Alternative Life
Author: Jim Hale
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(Added on May 24, 2004)
(This month 167227 readers) (Total 257132 readers) |
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A man of means desires to be a, plaything of a young lady. His wishes come true when he answers an ad for a, "Sugar Daddy". He quickly learns she knows far more than he about this lifestyle. He is mesmerized by her and does far more than he would have believed to please her. Additional chapters to follow very quickly. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
breakme
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Oct 18, 2005 |
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I have wanted to write a review for this story for a long time but have not been able to, everytime i go and try i read it again and have to recover! HA! Its a fantastic tale, we all miss your stories Jim, hoping a new one will grace us all soon. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
duchifat
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Jun 17, 2004 |
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It`s seems Amanda leads him to the place i would be more then happy to be..... (10/10)
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- Replied by:
wrighter4u
(Edit) (Jun 17, 2004)
- Thank you for the high marks! I am glad you like my story.
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| Reviewer:
trainmanretep
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May 30, 2004 |
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The concept of the story is a perfect 10, but the writing is not quite as good. However, i really do enjoy the story and look forard to further installments. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
wrighter4u
(Edit) (Jun 15, 2004)
- Thank you for your review. Since your review I have made several corrections. The story was in its infancy when you reviewed it. It is still not complete.
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| Reviewer:
buzby
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May 27, 2004 |
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can't wait for more (10/10)
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- Replied by:
wrighter4u
(Edit) (Jun 15, 2004)
- Thank you for reviewing my story. Thank you also for the high marks. Hey, it is the best one can receive. Thank you.
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| Reviewer:
rgratt
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May 24, 2004 |
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Just a trully great story, please keep it going it is wonderful,makes you want to keep reading and reading (10/10)
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- Replied by:
wrighter4u
(Edit) (Jun 15, 2004)
- Thank you for the high marks! Tens are what all writers wish for! The story is continuing as of this date.
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