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Tricia
Author: Anne Gray
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(Added on May 28, 2004)
(This month 52186 readers) (Total 65949 readers) |
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Asking to meet an author has interesting results. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Jun 20, 2010 |
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i agree with JimmyJump, but i know my writing skills are not very good. (10/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jan 20, 2009 |
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I have the feeling I should start writing myself.... who knows...
JJ (9/10)
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mkemse
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Jun 19, 2004 |
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was a good read (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
bracemaiden
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Jun 19, 2004 |
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I loved it. It was brief, and with a few tie/re-tie's, but the whole anonymous thing just worked well. Well thought out. (9/10)
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Grey Slayer
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Jun 3, 2004 |
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Short, but enjoyable. I liked the slow build-up, the fetish gear, and the setup. Only bad part was that it was over just as it was getting good. I'd love to read more. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
ms2bused
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Jun 2, 2004 |
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So wonderful to see this author now writing more sensuality and actual sexual scenarios then she has in the past! We SO need that for there are so limited amount of authors today that will dedicate a whole story to F/F domination, humiliation, and control! (9/10)
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e.e. norcod
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May 31, 2004 |
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I find this story interesting because it is rare to see such pure F/f bondage erotica well done with the emotional readout from the F point of view. About the only thing that could make it better (aside from including my favorite kinks which this time I will absolutely not do) would be to add a second chapter recapitulating the story from the point of view of the f (the more frequent pov) and see how closely the two version are. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Alex Bragi
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May 31, 2004 |
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I agree wtih Breannefun, it was a kind of cute and fun story.
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I thought is was very brave of you to write a story with no dialog. For me, that doesn't quite work unless there a whole lot more detail. Since you chose to write in the first person, I think including your thoughts and feelings could have given your story a more 'intimate' feel. Also, I'm no expert, but I think there may have been a few commas missing in some of those longer sentences.
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On the up side, your desciptions were clear, althought please remember not everyone will know how high 5" heels are - outside of the USA most people measure in metrics.
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Overall, it's a good read.
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| Reviewer:
Breannefun
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May 30, 2004 |
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This was a cute fun little story, especially from the domme side of the equation. I would have really enjoyed a bit more in the way of description: of the room, the girl, the thoughts running through the domme's head. Most of that detail I had to use my imagination for. But in any event...Can I meet you Ms. Gray? (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Anne Gray
(Edit) (May 30, 2004)
- Mission accomplished - I set the scene and let you(and each reader) use their imagination take them to a personal fantasy. Anne
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