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Apples and Oranges
Author: Estaban Bacca
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(Added on May 28, 2004)
(This month 91451 readers) (Total 109718 readers) |
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A chance encounter in the produce section attracts the attention of a stalker and Miara Martin's journey of discovery begins. This story has a slow build. If you have the mood of a horny sailor with a single night in port...If you are looking for instant gratification...If your name is Murgatroy ...then If I were you I'd give this one a pass...But for the rest of you... |
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Average (?):  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
tanifar
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Jun 21, 2004 |
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I enjoyed this story. Desite the author statement that it was slow I found the pace to be fine. It allowed for charater building therefore improving charater association. I liked the twist (very english) but true to life all the same (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
esclavadana
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Jun 11, 2004 |
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Subtle game of Ds. I love mind games! The story is getting better as it goes on. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
EstabanBacca
(Edit) (Jun 23, 2004)
- Thank you for reviewing.....E
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| Reviewer:
GaryWilcox
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Jun 9, 2004 |
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Update 6/9/04: I'm really struck by how realistic this story is, and grateful for the time the author takes to tell it. There are no easy plot devices here. Changing this to a 10, and I'll keep reading... (10/10)
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- Replied by:
EstabanBacca
(Edit) (Jun 8, 2004)
- Thank you for the review.
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| Reviewer:
learningtopleez
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Jun 5, 2004 |
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Wow...the only words I can use to describe the feeling you get after reading your story is hot, hotter and ready for more!!! My goodness, I think I was as wet as Miara when I finished the last part!! Please let there be more!!! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
EstabanBacca
(Edit) (Jun 8, 2004)
- Thank you for a nice review-E
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| Reviewer:
bisarah
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Jun 3, 2004 |
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a slow start, but it slowly bubbles into quite the hot hot hot story. please author ... more!!! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
EstabanBacca
(Edit) (Jun 8, 2004)
- Thank you for reviewing.
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e.e. norcod
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Jun 1, 2004 |
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Yes, yes, yes! I don't care which way this author swings but damn they write well. Each narrative is distinct and sharp and E.E. Norcord always loves alternating points of view.
Who cares if the author does not have the proper attitude that haughty ladies should be properly subjected to corporal punishment, the author knows how to write.
Even though I hate Porsches and Volvos I love this story.
Finally, an author that knows how to write English. I vow to never again write a review on a badly written story. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
EstabanBacca
(Edit) (Jun 8, 2004)
- Thank you for reviewing.
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| Reviewer:
jbowler65
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Jun 1, 2004 |
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Great beginning to the story. Good writing and a nice slow build up. We look forward to your future updates. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
EstabanBacca
(Edit) (Jun 8, 2004)
- Thank you for your review.
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| Reviewer:
Alex Bragi
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May 31, 2004 |
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One word – excellent.
More words – easily one of the best stories I've read in here. I'm certainly looking forward to more.
(10/10)
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- Replied by:
EstabanBacca
(Edit) (Jun 8, 2004)
- Thank you for reviewing.
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