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Captured
Author: longtallred
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(Added on Jun 9, 2004)
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A woman finds that innocent flirting can lead to some not-so-innocent consequences...and that escape is not always the most satisfying outcome. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
longrover
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Jun 22, 2004 |
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A well-told, brief tale. Bravo, and thank you. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
littleslut
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Jun 17, 2004 |
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Everything about it is great, the writing, the characters, the plot. One of the best short story's out there. Glad to hear this is not the end of your writing. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jun 11, 2004 |
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codes, storyline everything matches great wonderful job hopethere is more (10/10)
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- Replied by:
longtallred
(Edit) (Jun 12, 2004)
- Thanks for the feedback. It's nice to be appreciated! ;-) I will be posting another before too long.
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| Reviewer:
Faibhar
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Jun 10, 2004 |
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Filled with suspense, "Captured" leaves much to the reader's imagination - and that is good. A finely wrought short story sure to please. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
longtallred
(Edit) (Jun 12, 2004)
- Thanks for the feedback. It's nice to be appreciated! :-)
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| Reviewer:
GaryWilcox
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Jun 9, 2004 |
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Looking forward to see where this goes, but I like the first installment... Particularly like the way your write. You seem to come from the Stephen King school of narrative perspective, same as me. More, please! (8/10)
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- Replied by:
longtallred
(Edit) (Jun 12, 2004)
- Thanks for the feedback. It's nice to be appreciated! ;-) I will be posting another soon.
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