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Collage Fun and Games
Author: sweet_sub
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(Added on Jun 22, 2004)
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I'm caught doing what i shouldn't, and in order to keep my secret I agree to take part in a game. |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 22, 2005 |
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good beginning, let's see where you go from here (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
jbowler65
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Jul 3, 2004 |
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Good teasing story. Hopefully it'll continue. Some minor errors in spelling, but overall, pretty good. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
bracemaiden
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Jun 22, 2004 |
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I love the situation, and the teasing; I'm a big fan of discrete public bondage. It was also good that everyone left satisfied. The female wasn't only treated like a piece of meat to serve the guy.
I have to agree with Rocky though - there are errors that spell-check just won't find. Who spends 7 years in college anyway? (7/10)
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- Replied by:
sweet_sub
(Edit) (Jun 24, 2004)
- Thanks for your feedback. Just so you know, It was a joint High School and College (I'm in England), so I attended it for 7 years.
p.s I really love your stories
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| Reviewer:
Rocky
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Jun 22, 2004 |
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Nice premise, however...the author needs to do something other than a spell check.
A "collage" isn't a place of higher education, it's a form of art. A "college" is where one goes to learn. Neither is a "draw" a place where you store things; that is a "drawer." If the grammer were corrected, I could easily rate this a couple of points higher. (5/10)
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