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A Night in the Desert
Author: Jack Peacock
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(Added on Jun 25, 2004)
(This month 109239 readers) (Total 136372 readers) |
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Imagine a barren, deserted location far from civilization. Imagine an isolated place where no one could possibly show up, especially on a dark night. Imagine what happens when the unimaginable occurs... |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
embe
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Jun 4, 2008 |
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This story makes my heart sing! Its a love story that reveals a journey taken by both the Master and the slave. The transition made from an unrequited hidden desire for both of them, strangers bound together because they complete each other. Its what they are thinking and feeling and why they need it and each other. More than the everyday "stiffner" of bondage sex and lust between the muscular hugely endowed Dominant and some young nymphete who is used and abused. Its the love story we all long for, to be loved for who we "really" are, completed by the other becoming something beautiful to each other. I'm still dying to know more about the Master in the story, how does he reveal his past to her,perfect heroes can be so boring. I'd love to hear more from these characters. Well Done! (10/10)
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bracemaiden
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Jul 30, 2005 |
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This one kind of goes on and on. While the road has a few twists and turns, the straightaways let the driver see them SO far in advance that any surprise is gone.
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BruceCC
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Sep 12, 2004 |
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Great story. The emotional state of the semi-consensual sub is described very well. Jack obviously put a lot of though into the plot. Highly recommended. (9/10)
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gangaze
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Jun 27, 2004 |
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women in the prison is interesting subject I like this story and enjoyed. part-2 if you write,
what about sell sue Ann into Mexican trader for
the condition of 1 year whore term for money and then via extradition rule to Mexico city police for her crime, court put her jail at once, then US jail. So Sue Ann's dream life in prison come true. (8/10)
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