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Honey
Author: Allene Blake
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(Added on Apr 19, 2001)
(This month 17115 readers) (Total 42637 readers) |
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Her rotten mother exploits her daughter to satisfy drug habit. |
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Mar 9, 2006 |
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That the mother is in jail is a good thing. Doubt that a girl would stand that amount of pain. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
hyphen666
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Apr 29, 2001 |
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After reading the third story in this massive posting, I still see the same weaknesses in dialogue ( no one speaks like that ), the same mis-spellings, the same abrupt personality changes in the heroine,the same one-dimensional characters, the same inane " happy endings ", and the same fascination with the technical aspects of whipping techniques and implements.
On the positive side I see more emphasis on bondage and the use of innovaive positions in which to administer the endless beatings that our teenage masochist enjoys. There are more characters and in this story there seemed to be a serious attempt to develop the mother as a person. It is also apparent that the author is beginning to incorporate the elements of slave or humiliation stories such as those written by Terri Madison or JP, into her stories.
Considering some of Allene's later short stories, many of the negatives I've mentioned here were obviously seen and corrected by the author. Thus there is no reason to critique any more of these postings. (7/10)
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