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Bringing in Sarah
Author: DJ Tuk
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(Added on Sep 25, 2004)
(This month 24426 readers) (Total 51317 readers) |
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When a parcel is received offering an introduction to submission Sarah is curious enough to play along. She lives to regret it. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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JimmyJump
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Dec 12, 2011 |
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Too short, too fast and too unpersonal. Good plot though.
JJ (7/10)
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Dryhill
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Apr 9, 2010 |
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Not bad, but could become excellent if there are more chapters about her new life. (8/10)
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longrover
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Dec 24, 2005 |
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An excellent beginning. The surprise got me. (9/10)
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mkemse
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May 11, 2005 |
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not bad (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
stormbringer
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Oct 2, 2004 |
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it was good, I enjoyed the beginning, I was a little put off at the end, but it is a good read (8/10)
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Ruby
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Oct 1, 2004 |
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Good story could be made great with some editing. Give us some more descriptions and help the reader see the story as well as feel it.
Looking forward to your next chapter. (8/10)
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castle2001
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Sep 28, 2004 |
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Well written. Keep at it. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Grey Slayer
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Sep 26, 2004 |
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A good read, but the foreshadowing was too strong--I guessed the surprise ending early on. But worth reading, and would read more of this writer's work. (7/10)
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Xaphan45
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Sep 26, 2004 |
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Very original approach, a real jewel. Although not as realistic as some stories. I found it just what I needed, letting my imagination revive. (9/10)
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Spectre
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Sep 25, 2004 |
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Interesting. Well written and enjoyable. F/f is not usually my preference, but I did enjoy this. Looking forward to more. (9/10)
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