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Family Ties
Author: dreamster
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(Added on Oct 6, 2004)
(This month 87199 readers) (Total 156681 readers) |
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This story will chart the gradual but inexorable total corruption of a relatively 'normal family'from early sexual experimentation to ultimate degradation and destruction via an ever increasing level of perversions. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
subalo
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Jan 23, 2012 |
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It seems it should continue on, it ends way too soon. Good work so far! (9/10)
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Amars
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May 22, 2011 |
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Use, excellent. Am going to look for more from you. Need more of this story. Thanks (10/10)
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Panther007
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May 4, 2011 |
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Very good, hope to see more some day. (8/10)
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jip
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Aug 22, 2006 |
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Very special. sexy exiting.. (8/10)
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BigCat
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Jul 23, 2005 |
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Terrific! Extremely well written. Characters and situations well developed. Excellent erotica. Would very much like to see the story continue. (10/10)
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portis
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Mar 21, 2005 |
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Add me to the list of those waiting for the next chapter(s)...some of the best erotic work i've read in a long time! (9/10)
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master_wolf
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Feb 14, 2005 |
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Having read all the reviews of this, I'm not sure there's anything more I can add except my own wow... Obviously, I'm a young man, but my ever-searching imagination was captured by this increadably realistic story. I, as well, truely hope this was not an abandoned project, as I would love to hear more of it. Thanks for a great time! (10/10)
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MasterRJ
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Feb 13, 2005 |
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Man...I really hope this wasn't an abandoned project. I really enjoyed the read. I'm big on the whole innocence thing, but I like the spin you've put on it. Instead of destroying the innocence, the 'attackers' in the story more or less embrace it...or do they? I'm afraid I may never know...how sad... (9/10)
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peachers
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Dec 30, 2004 |
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i also loved how it was slow and descriptive,can t wait for next update
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LordVetinari
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Oct 25, 2004 |
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Sick and twisted, yet with an underlying current of verisimilitude. It was erotic, sexy, and evil. I liked it, and can't wait for future chapters. Thank you, very much. (8/10)
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pippa
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Oct 24, 2004 |
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I loved this story so far. I am intriqued to know what philippa is going to get up to (naturally- though she is nothing like me!). I dont understand Breaane's comment about ages ?- arent the main girls 12 and 13? I thought the girls were quite believable- but I guess we all have different views.
I like the way the story just doesnt jump into wild BDSM- I like realistic stories but I accept thats just me *grinz* Do keep it going dreamster please as you have another avid fan!!!I dont mind if it's slow as long as its descriptive *grinz again*
I have just read chapter 3 and its soooo sensual and erotic. I love the way David is gradually being corrupted- its very believable which I adore. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
dreamster
(Edit) (Oct 11, 2004)
- Thanks pippa. As a middle aged male I can only guess at what goes on in the minds of young teenagers! Certainly the switch from girl to woman that I observe in many is a constant, intriquing and stimulating surprise!-- I do appreciate you taking the trouble to review- it does make the effort worth while- PS do you write for library?
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mkemse
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Oct 23, 2004 |
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very well done so far, i hope there is more to come, the step by step is great
If the next few posts off add on chapters are as good as this is so far, the wait will be worth it
ALL GOOD THINGS CUM TO THOSE WHO WAIT, just don't wait 2 years :) (9/10)
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- Replied by:
dreamster
(Edit) (Oct 11, 2004)
- thank you mk-I appreciate your comments- There is quite a lot to come its finding time to transfer the detailed plot to print that takes the time- I hope the next chapters will prove worth waiting for.
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boxe1234
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Oct 14, 2004 |
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I am looking forward to the next and perhaps many more chapters. (10/10)
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DutchDaddy
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Oct 13, 2004 |
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Keep up the good work!!
Can't wait for the next chapter. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
lifferiam
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Oct 10, 2004 |
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this ia a good story. could have more oral, anal,sm, male dom and hard (7/10)
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- Replied by:
dreamster
(Edit) (Oct 11, 2004)
- Thank you lifferiam for taking the time and trouble to review. My intention is to cover all that you ask for-including some you haven't but by whom to whom even I am not sure of- my stories often take on a life of their own.
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| Reviewer:
Breannefun
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Oct 6, 2004 |
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I loved almost everything about this story. First of all, I didn't notice any grammatical errors...always a plus. Descriptions were a little weak, however this just let me use my imagination. I do think however that the initial innocent behavior when we meet the girls is a little...overdone. 14 year old girls don't act like that. At least, I didn't at 14. 12 maybe...in any event, this was exciting and interesting. Can't wait for more.
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- Replied by:
dreamster
(Edit) (Oct 11, 2004)
- Thank you Breannefun- you are generous! With regard to ages - well originally the girls were a little younger and I have amended story to reflect this. As to whether they are still accurate I can only refer you to my comments to pippa. As this is a long story I have tried to let the detailed descriptions emerge over the chapters as the story unfolds. Viz.Chapter 2.
I try and fix the character's motivations and personalities first. Also letting reader use their imagination is often a good way to get and keep their interest I think. Thank you again.
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