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A Camping Trip
Author: kittenfemme
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(Added on Oct 6, 2004)
(This month 18563 readers) (Total 47291 readers) |
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Ms Loren and her pet, sara, go camping. |
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Average (?):  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
smartass kitten
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May 22, 2007 |
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I absolutely love your stories. This one is among my favorites :-)
The devotion and feelings are so real.
*squirm*
Wish you'd post more. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Apr 19, 2005 |
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Very nice story. It kind of reminds me of a trip I took my subs on. (9/10)
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sunburststrat
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Mar 20, 2005 |
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This is such a touching story, the way the love between these two is so evident. Such lovely erotica, and such a beautiful writing style. I only wish there were more stories like this, exploring how sweet and romantic submission can be. (10/10)
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kristina katyn
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Jan 27, 2005 |
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This is an extremely sexy story. Sara's frustration as Loren ignores her sexual needs is so real it is almost tangible. What is more Sara appears to revel in being bound and helpless and unsatisfied. It is so realistic, so powerful. I would even like parts of my own life to be like that. (9/10)
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Wmnwholves
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Oct 7, 2004 |
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This has replaced The Collar as my favorite of your stories. Well written. Pacing was excellent, and shows belivablility of this story in the lifestyle. Keep up the good work. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
GrottrolletNaug
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Oct 6, 2004 |
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Cozy. I love cozy *smile* The story really conveys a cuddly, wonderful and loving feel which, according to me, most internet bdsm stories are too void of. Very well done, please keep it up *smile* (9/10)
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- Replied by:
kittenfemme
(Edit) (Oct 7, 2004)
- Thank you for the kind review GrottrolletNaug.
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| Reviewer:
Gemna
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Oct 6, 2004 |
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Every time I read one of your stories, I can hardly belive that they could possibly get better; which is of course only true untill you write the next one. Amazing, should I say "as always" ? Thank you so much for writing these stories, they always make my day. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
kittenfemme
(Edit) (Oct 6, 2004)
- You're so sweet Gemna! I'm very glad you enjoy my stories. Thank you for the glittering review.
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| Reviewer:
Breannefun
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Oct 6, 2004 |
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This was a wonderful story, an excellent example of love in a D/s relationship. Light, playful, and fun. I loved the foreshadowing. Such a great feeling of tenderness. The story itself was well written, seductive and descriptive. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
kittenfemme
(Edit) (Oct 6, 2004)
- Thank you Breannefun!
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| Reviewer:
nova
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Oct 6, 2004 |
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i think i still haven't come down after reading this. The level of detail was such that i could imagine myself as being in the same room, even supposedly trivial things such as descriptions of the cooking (yeah thanks, i haven't had lasagne in years but i REALLY want some now!!!!!)
The massage, and the scene in the tent were perfect examples of erotic fiction, and the fact that they were interspersed with the mundane heightened that all the more.
You hit all the right buttons with this!!!! Great!!!
(10/10)
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- Replied by:
kittenfemme
(Edit) (Oct 6, 2004)
- Thank you for the wonderful review nova. I have a great lasagna recipe if you like. :)
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