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Snuff Bunny
Author: Robin Lane
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(Added on Oct 14, 2004)
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A young girl has her dream come true, and it lasts only one wonderful, intense, and final night. This is my first attempt at a Dolcett style story, and my first ever involving snuff. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
HuManiMal
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Nov 2, 2011 |
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An exceptional story by any measure, but I found it exceptionally violent and gross, more then it needed to be. Yes, it was balanced with tender loving moments, but it was too lopsided.
More precisely, I imagined a perfect girl's body being damaged so her erotic sexiness vanished, making her ugly in my mind, loosing any eroticism it had. If it was a kind of Snow White vs Evil Queen (Ms Donovan, who wants to be the fairest) paring, it is not obvious.
Another issue is a girl Trish who seemed to never experiance any sadism take all that brutality and cheerful want more seems out of whack (pun!) even for a Dolcett world.
Still, it has excellent parts and is a great overall story. (8/10)
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Omega22
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Nov 25, 2010 |
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I like this story because it is one of there rare extreme stories where everyone is happy. even these who dont like snuff may find it interesting.
anyway there could be mote interesting tortures than just beating and humiliating,that looks a bit tame comparing to later snuffing, but anyway everything was nice.
(9/10)
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jeanne
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Nov 3, 2004 |
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I took much pleasure in reading 'Snuff Bunny'; I'm no snuff fan myself, but who could not be aroused by your delightful words:
"As a snuff bunny, my job is to be as beautiful and cheerful as possible for the client. I must allow them to use and abuse and torture me in any way they wish, and not complain or resist, and to make a good show of my suffering for them to enjoy. If they tell me to do something, I must do it quickly, eagerly and enthusiastically regardless of the consequences to me. I must not ask for mercy, and I should, wherever appropriate, beg them as hard as I can to continue to inflict their most brutal attentions on my body."
I've found that scenes where victims are aware of being performers for an audience, and choose to perform well, are VERY erotic. (reason for their choice can be fear of a worse fate, erotic arousal, submission, or a mixture of those - in your case it is almost all pleasure and submission - in Dante's stories it is all three - it is always good anyway).
I understand you have other interests - I found your other story on BDSMlibrary a bit too vanilla - but that only underlines your skill in providing this story.
May I especially thank you for making sure that only smooth hairless pussies adorn these delicious scenes. To me a hairy twat will ruin the day! And the additional touch of a stiffly protruding clit, vulnerable to the worst punitive measures, is a special thrill for me.
More, please! (10/10)
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malelesbian
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Oct 24, 2004 |
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I am not normally a fan of snuff fiction, but I find Ms. Lane's work to be remarkabley full of positive emotion, even with such a subject as this. I am familiar with Dolcett's work, and I must admit I am not a fan. But Ms. Lane seems to have the ability to make us want to believe that the worlds that she builds her stories in are real. Trish was had an almost childlike cheerfulness despite being so wonderfully slutty. The evisceration/dismemberment scene sounded like a lot of fun despite having enough gore to make 'Friday the 13th' look like a boring high school biology class. And there was not a single page that didn't shine with razor-sharp wit and steamy, volcanic eroticism. Where has this author been all these years? And why is she only now sharing her gift with the world? I can't wait to read more of Robin Lane's work! I want to live in her world! (10/10)
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Xaphan45
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Oct 18, 2004 |
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The semi-mythical artist Dolcett has created an alternate universe where women outnumber men something like 20-1. Because of this, female life has little value in the traditional sense for the majority, but not all, of women. Robin has captured the spirit of Dolcett's world, thankfully unrealistic though it may be. Her writing puts you inside the mind of both the sub and the domme in a well paced and graphic account. I look forward to her continued exploration into forbidden, and stricly fantasy worlds. (9/10)
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bobbi101
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Oct 18, 2004 |
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well this is the first ever snuff story i ever read..was very moving and enjoyable.look forward to reading more about snuff and looking for more from the same author
Bobbi (10/10)
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Spitman
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Oct 15, 2004 |
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This was certainly along the lines of a Dolcett story, although Dolcett's stories are extreme snuff fantasy without the physical abuse contained in this story. The cheerfulness Trish kept up throughout the story stretched credibility to the limit, because of the way she was abused before being snuffed. Otherwise it might have got a 9. (7/10)
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