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The Princess Game
Author: Simone Locke
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(Added on Oct 19, 2004)
(This month 16184 readers) (Total 35495 readers) |
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Why had she liked to be the one tied up as a child? Cynthia hadn't thought about it in years, until her new love found out about it. Now the stakes have gone up! |
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Average (?):  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
texancharm{E.C.Holland}
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Aug 19, 2008 |
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Wow. Wow! This was excelently written, and very stimulating! Those are some amazing contraptions: what a lucky sub! (10/10)
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lechatnoirxvii
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Mar 2, 2008 |
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Very good, I wish the story would continue! (10/10)
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nikita
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Feb 25, 2006 |
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Very tight, well written story, a fantasy that needs to be continued. (10/10)
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ropebinder
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Apr 5, 2005 |
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Simone Locke presents a well written piece about a master's Internet and webcam domination of a young woman. Unfortunately, like most erotica the entire story feels like a set up for some real drama and action and then abrubtly ends at the moment they meet in person. I believe that very few writers have much practical bdsm experience and are unable to delve into much detail, even concerning simple lovemaking. As such, this story, while well written, is basically another common fantasy without much fanfare. I found it boring. Sorry. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
emmacd
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Mar 8, 2005 |
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The suspense kept until the end. Is there another chapter or two. Emma (7/10)
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bracemaiden
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Dec 4, 2004 |
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I'm jealous that I don't have the creativity and command of the English language that Simone does - his words flow beautifully. The words paint vivid pictures of the action. The only
unfortunate thing about the story is the last line - "end" instead of "to be continued".
(10/10)
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Ocean_Soul
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Oct 21, 2004 |
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A great story and very well written. Looking forward to a continuation. (10/10)
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longrover
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Oct 21, 2004 |
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I liked this even more than "Long Road," and I didn't need a movie ad! Connecting a childhood game to an adult fantasy realization is a fairly common strategy, but the princess worked out much better than most. Having a confederate move her was a top-notch idea.
Lon (10/10)
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chksng19
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Oct 21, 2004 |
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Well written and exciting start to the story. (Personally, I'd like to see the princess daydream go further...). Crisp and real character, well-defined and fun.
Anxious for more! (10/10)
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learningtopleez
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Oct 20, 2004 |
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This has to be the most well written story I have read here in quite awhile! It doesn't hurt that the story itself is so erotic and stimulating! Keep this one going....please! (10/10)
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Rusty Bedpost
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Oct 19, 2004 |
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WOW! Best start to a story I've read in a long time. Captivating and intriguing. Hope to read more soon..Keep writing (10/10)
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getoffmyelflord
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Oct 19, 2004 |
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This was a wonderful story, very exciting and erotic. It doesn't hurt that it's something that i can relate to. lol. It was very well written, and as a writer, i can appreciate the way you have laid out the events, with flashbacks and dreams. Please, i would love to see more of your work! (10/10)
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