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Little Darlings
Author: Robin Lane
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(Added on Oct 23, 2004)
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To find their Mistress, two young women undertake a three hundred mile journey... completely naked. |
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| Reviewer:
compassion
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Jul 14, 2014 |
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A very well written story, outlandish? sure, in some parts, but that is part of the tittilating nature these stories should contain. I like the kind of relationship the girls are building up, their loving kindness of sharing. The mutual pee experiences I find a bit extreme, as I do with the tit beating, but their traveling in the nude is realistically described enough. And there is a happy ending. Hopefully their lives with their new found mistress will turn out to be enjoyable for both girls. Stay brave, girls! (10/10)
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Martiniman
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Jan 5, 2012 |
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This story is just so perfect in so many ways! It is absolutely a must read! (10/10)
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Dryhill
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Mar 8, 2011 |
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This is the third or fourth time i have read this story and though i know it is fiction, it still has the feeling of being a true account of two young people seeking a Mistress. It makes a pleasent change to have a Dominant/slave story where love comes across so clearly and there is no sex and hardly any whipping.
Thank you Robin Lane for such an enjoyable "feel good" story. Just before Christmas i learnt that i have a rare problem with my auto immune system whose treatment requires large doses of steroids and the dreaded chemo. This story has cheered me up immensly and i am thinking of recommending it to my consultant as part of the cure. (10/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jan 28, 2009 |
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Added this to one of my shelves, quite some time ago, so, maybe add a review as well.
When reading the synopsys of "Little Darlings", one's first reaction is "Ooh, yesss...", but in the time between reading and opening the story itself, you start to wonder "two girls, on a 300 miles journey, that's 450 kilometers, naked?... Mmmm... isn't that a wee bit far-fetched?"
And, indeed, the longer you think of it, the more you come to the conclusion that it is far-fetched. Ludicrous even.
Then, you start reading the actual story. And after the first paragraph, you already know that, ludicrous or not, the author seems to have skill.
Some more paragraphs, and you know that she has. More than that even, Robin Lane has talent. It shows in the way she describes the surroundings, the atmosphere and especially the mood, motivations and thoughts of, first Sandy, and later both Sandy and Grace.
By the time both girls have been introduced, there's no longer thoughts about ludicrousness, or far-fetchedness, because, by then, you are already absorbed in, captivated by the story.
From then onward, it is no longer a journey of two, but a trek involving three people, with the reader as the third party.
Slowly, literally step-by-step, as you live the agonies and dreams of the girls, as you learn about their deep-rooted feelings, while the author sheds the girls' clothes in a delicious and believable way, as their adventure and their enslavement sets in, all thoughts of but the slightest far-fetchedness are obliterated.
Because the story is 'real', Grace and Sandy's endeavour is 'real', their budding love for each other is 'real', their mental self-enslavement, early-on on their journey, even subconsciently, is 'real', their fears and joys are 'real'...
And everything is marinated in that lush, enticing tone, used throughout the tale. The splendidly enhanced and penned down naivité of the girls. But while being naive, at the same time the girls know their destiny, know their fate and what that fate holds, has in store.
And when they finally arrive, the way the girls surrender to Carla, is a delight to read, so eager, so gracious in their eagerness.
This here story, a chronicle of an anslavement foretold, has the advantage, contrary to so many other stories, that it only speaks of the journey, that the author doesn't include some sort of training after the girls' arrival.
Because it is not needed, because the girls were trained already, because the girls conditioned themselves along the journey, because the journey IS the training, the conditioning.
A true marvel, extremely well written and a must-read for anyone who enjoys erotic fiction.
Thank you, Robin Lane, for the extreme delight of letting us be able to read such wonderous story.
Far-fetched? Ludicrous? On the contrary...
JJ (10/10)
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Insidious
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Apr 25, 2005 |
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Only just got around to reading this, I'm afraid. (9/10)
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sunburststrat
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Nov 9, 2004 |
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A very charming and touching story. Very high marks for originality. As with the best stories, these two sweet girls and their mistress have stayed in my head for days. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Robin Lane
(Edit) (Nov 23, 2004)
- Wow! Thank you, my friend! I hope all of these wonderfull warm fuzzies don't go to my head. I don't want to write out of vanity. Look for more of my stories to be posted soon.
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TK Jones
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Oct 30, 2004 |
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I LOVED it! Great job! (10/10)
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MrVortex
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Oct 28, 2004 |
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Awesome story.. I have read several of the stories here and this one had me riveted from beginning to end keeping me up way past my bed time.. I would love to hear more of these 2 girls adventures with their Mistress :)... (10/10)
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Wmnwholves
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Oct 27, 2004 |
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This is one of the best written stories that I have read in quite some time. It takes an unbelievable situation and made me for a short time believe it. The storyline was tight, great flow, and not overwritten or just sex for sex. The grammer was well done with only a few typos seen. Keep up the good work and I hope your muse is kind and we are graced with more of your imaginative storytelling. (10/10)
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ga400us
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Oct 26, 2004 |
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Well written, believable dialog and a great imagination...I could walk 300 miles in the buff! Keep writing. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Robin Lane
(Edit) (Nov 23, 2004)
- Thank you, fine Sir! I will! Look for more stories from the pit of my imagination to be posted soon.
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malelesbian
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Oct 24, 2004 |
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What an interesting tidbit of lesbian erotica! Robin Lane has a rare gift! She has taken a premise that under any other circumstances would be too far fetched to be realistic, and made it sound believable. I can't help but wonder how much fun it would be to try and go on a hike of several hundred miles in the nude. And I have less motivation for such a journey than Sandy and Grace. I give it a ten just for the emotion conveyed from the opening line to the last word. Great work! (10/10)
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Xaphan45
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Oct 23, 2004 |
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As the motto of the Royal Air Force puts it, "Per Ardua Ad Astra==Through Adversity To The Stars". This story can be seen as a metaphor for the whole BDSM experience. It can indeed be a long way to find the fulfillment all of us seek either from the submissive or even the dominant side of things. Although this particular journey may appear unrealistic, that can be the entire point of this genre. Fanatasy is not just the means of transportation, it can be the destination itself.
This author has exhibited excellent writing skills, as in her previous story. I also hope against hope that after taking this pilgrimage, I could worship at the shrine of the Goddess with the faithful (9/10)
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