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Wednesday in SOHO
Author: Mad Lews
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(Added on Oct 23, 2004)
(This month 10637 readers) (Total 22159 readers) |
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Story of a preformance Artist in SOHO england who is publicly stripped whipped and crucified with a little humiliation thrown in all in a days work and the pays OK. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Clevernick
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May 15, 2007 |
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This is brilliant. The idea is great, one of the best I've seen, and I don't think could have been presented any better than it was! Manages to humanize and individuate even the anonymous audience members.
Climax: Excellent.
Style: Better than I can do.
Grammar and spelling: Should have taken an extra proofread. Verb tenses slip frequently. "It's" used in several places as a possessive. (Remember, his, her, its are all possessive pronouns and need no apostrophe. "It's" is a noun plus a verb.) I actually find little errors like this distracting, or I wouldn't have noticed them.
(9/10)
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Beswitchingly Positive
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May 5, 2007 |
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This is a captivating saga of an acting job gone wrong. It gives a feeling of the tiedium of any job. The beutiful moment comes when the gentleman finally makes this poor actress come and it is worth suffering through the rest to get to the delicious end.
I love the idea of public theatrical crucifictions; this image and story was satisfying on so many levels. Way to touch on the taboo of s&m and bring a religious flavor to the piece. (10/10)
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pbugler
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Oct 29, 2004 |
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This is an enjoyable, imaginative and well written story. Told in the first person, it is a fascinating look into the unreal world of an actress in an interactive mock crucifixion, and it certainly is interactive! Definitely entertaining. (9/10)
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Sui Lerua
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Oct 29, 2004 |
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Well-written and very erotic short story. Please post more.
(9/10)
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longrover
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Oct 27, 2004 |
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A unique crucifixion story in that the victim is paid for her pain, a "volunteer" like any other employee. Her comments on her situation were thoughtful but lacked emotion. That flatness made it more real, as if she had become enured to her work like anyone else. Several elementary errors could be corrected by proofreading. Well done! Lon (8/10)
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mkemse
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Oct 23, 2004 |
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i enojoyed the read, hope there is more to cum (7/10)
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- Replied by:
mgmoore
(Edit) (Oct 23, 2004)
- Whoo Hoo someone read it. Thanks for the kind review. I'll be happy to keep writing but it be a slow process. I did write an ending to the "Story of O" but I'm not sure if it belongs here.
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