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Evil
Author: julieshining
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(Added on Nov 14, 2004)
(This month 9737 readers) (Total 16821 readers) |
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Julie returns from Africa, but she is followed by evil supernatural dogs who pack rape her. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 19, 2009 |
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well done (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
callofthewild
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Nov 17, 2004 |
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very good story hope u continue it to the finish (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Breannefun
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Nov 15, 2004 |
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Well I think the other reviewers hit all the high points, except I really loved the religious symbology. I recognized the "hell hounds" from myth. Additionally, I thought the very last line (discounting the error of course) was a real corkscrew turn for the reader. It made me shiver. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Powerone
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Nov 14, 2004 |
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I liked this story, very original idea. The rape was very deliberate, the girl forced to submit to the dogs. (9/10)
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pangent617
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Nov 14, 2004 |
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I found this to be a good story as a short story, the rape though not graphic was detailed enough to start to feel tension. Real potential for writing. I would be interested in other ideas you have. Looking forward to your next effort. (7/10)
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chksng19
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Nov 14, 2004 |
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A fair start on an interesting plot line. Writing is well done, though an editor might help eliminate silly errors, such as in the last sentence.
One serious problem is your listing of what is contained in the story. Bestiality isn't mentioned. Rape isn't stated. Pregnancy isn't, etc, etc, These are VERY important because they can turn a reader away from your works forever, concerned that you overstep the bounds of their interests.
Fix those concerns, and your score will rise, you'll attract more readers, and we'll be waiting in line for the next chapter. (6/10)
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