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Ruth-Anne's Miscalculation
Author: Pangent617
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(Added on Nov 23, 2004)
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Ruth-Anne Klauss discovers that self-bondage is a real turn on. She is smart and thorough and never makes a mistake, well almost never. |
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Dec 31, 2004 |
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I'm glad I waited until part two came out to review this one. It's magnificent. I could never have included so much repetition of activity and made it fresh all the way to the end. And Ruth-Anne still hasn't had her first orgasm yet! This is really artful, and I'm very much enjoying the tease. Can't wait to see where it leads. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Nov 26, 2004 |
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Based on the story codes, I have to assume that this is the first chapter of a much longer work. Self bondage has been represented on this site by a number of recent postings, which is a very good thing to add to the mix. The author certainly knows the material that comprises this story, as well as exhibiting an above average vocabulary. On the other side of things the editing leaves very much to be desired. There are dozens of sentences that are incomplete or seem to run-on forever. There are obvious typos that have not been corrected. Of interest the imperfection density seems to rise as the events being described become more sexually charged. There is nothing wrong with that in itself, but prudence would dictate that the author return to the scene of the crime and make sure all the evidence has been taken away. Please take this criticism as being constructive. In passing I do applaud your use of a heroine who doesn't have an awesome figure and is relatively long in the tooth. My current rating is more of a bookmark since there is much more to come. I have the habit of revisiting my reviews at a later date to make sure that justice has been done. I look forward to seeing more from you in the very near future. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
pangent617
(Edit) (Nov 26, 2004)
- Point taken, I noticed the myriad of typos and other writing indiscretions. I take your criticism serioulsy and will endeavour to take more time proofreading my submissions. Thank you for taking the time to review.
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Master_chris
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Nov 26, 2004 |
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I do love A great self bondage story, and this is one of the best I have read this year.
I can't wait to see that happens next. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
pangent617
(Edit) (Nov 26, 2004)
- Thank you for your kind words. Th e2nd of th 3 parts is almost ready to post. Lok for it in the next few days.
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