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Jill
Author: Allene Blake
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(Added on May 10, 2001)
(This month 31638 readers) (Total 79972 readers) |
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Young girl spanked by neighbor then finds she loves torture games with boys. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Losalt
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Nov 22, 2008 |
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It's a good story.
It should have "young" added to the story code.
There's a few other things that I can't put my finger on too..
Perhaps someone with more skills in literature can spot it and tell you what exactly it is..
Anyways, a good story and I look forward to the next story you make :) (9/10)
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bernie
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Apr 8, 2004 |
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Felt it had a good story line... little too long but the exciting part was throughout the story (7/10)
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drake7
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Mar 28, 2004 |
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I should read stories from the site more often, if a friend hadn't recommended this one to me I wouldn't have read it. As the other reviewers have noted, it is certainly a 10, but I most enjoyed reading about the thoughts and feelings going on inside the main character. They seemed quite believable and realistic- and most certainly entertaining. (10/10)
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QuinOTK
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Dec 4, 2003 |
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Honestly, I almost stopped reading during the initial "molestation" by the neighbor, however the description of her thoughts kept me reading. The story touches, well, upon many varied fetishes and aspects of the lifestyle. I very much liked the fact that there are both "real" and "wannabe" Dominants in the story. Well written and it flows beautifully. Look forward to reading more from Allene. (10/10)
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greenhornt
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Jul 25, 2003 |
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The best story I have read on this site. Great dialog. Vivid characters. Keep on writing more. (10/10)
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T-Luv
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May 20, 2003 |
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This was one of the hottest stories I've ever read. In particular, most of it fell right in line with the kind of fantasies I like the most: young teen girls receiving harsh punishment, with sexual activity. The writing was excellent. The story seemed well thought out and believable. I only have one small quibble. I think "Young" should have been included in the story codes, because the girls are 11 or 12 at the beginning. I generally prefer characters 13+. However, those early scenes were handled well. All in all, a very enjoyable erotic tale. (10/10)
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