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Corporal Punishment
Author: Michael Alexander
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(Added on Nov 23, 2004)
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The school faculty have had it with Tami's antics, each teacher taking revenge for the girl's disobedience...each in their own special way. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 29, 2005 |
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glad i am out of school (9/10)
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Cokera
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Dec 7, 2004 |
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I had to actually print this one out. It was a really great story line. I would say more but that it was a well thought out theme and captured my thoughts and imagination to a unbreakable level of attention. It really did hit just about every "nerve". (10/10)
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- Replied by:
michaelalexande
(Edit) (Dec 8, 2004)
- Dear Cokera,
I'm very pleased that you enjoyed Corporal Punishment. Being printed out is quite a compliment. "Hitting every nerve" is a better one. I really enjoyed writing this piece and have been surprised at the astonishing lack of attention it received, so your note means twice as much. Thank you. Yours Faithfully, Michael Alexander
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Dec 3, 2004 |
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Generally a very good story, flower aside (this is the first time I've heard a vagina called that, but then a recent story was the first time I'd heard it called a 'purse'). I can't go with a '10' because of the misuse of the purple wand. Unlike in this story, they create a pleasant buzz/tingle when up against the skin. The painful reaction described herein would be caused by running it 1 or 2 centimeters above the skin, forcing the electricity to jump the gap. Also, the three point electrical hookup in the same chapter would be dangerous (current crossing the heart, risk of defibrilization) and probably wouldn't affect her clit much without a fourth wire down in that region for the current to pass between (too far/too much resistance for it to pass from her nipples to her clitoris). Although of a considerable length, this story isn't TOO long, which the one mentioned by fssfan13 was. I wonder what was in the third jar in the crockpot, which never got used? Actually, there's quite alot to nitpick here, but it was enjoyable, anyway (got me off twice). I hope you post more stories here. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
michaelalexande
(Edit) (Dec 6, 2004)
- Dear Curtis, You are absolutely right. I didn't do my research concerning the electrical play. I accept the lower rating for that fact, and that fact alone. As to your "nitpicking", I took some time to look over your reviews. I'm glad that you are not my regular editor, since it is fairly obvious that nothing would ever get published. As to "more stories", I have fifteen on the BDSM Library, some better than others. Feel free to critique and "nitpick" them. Yours Faithfully - Michael Alexander
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Breannefun
(Edit) (Dec 18, 2004)
- Curtis, I read your review. You were wrong on the "electrical hookup." Each one of those clamps had TWO wires going to it. "She picked up several small metal clamps, each shaped with tiny metal teeth and two colored wires leading away. Tami screamed, her voice..." So all that stuff about crossing the heart and current isn't right. And for that matter, how do you know that the purple wand wasn't doctored by the science teacher? I may be a political science major, but I know that if you change the type of resistor in a circuit you can change the level of electricity in it. Maybe this science teacher did this. Well anyway, just thought I'd mention it.
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fssfan13
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Nov 24, 2004 |
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Creative. Different than the other high school humiliation setting story. A very well round story covers many forms of punishment and humiliation scenarios. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
michaelalexande
(Edit) (Nov 29, 2004)
- Thank you. I wanted something a little more...intense than some of the other high school humiliation stories I've read. The format of class changes allowed me to explore some of the darker roads of my imagination. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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chksng19
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Nov 24, 2004 |
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Kudos, Mr. Alexander. A wonderful tale. (10/10)
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Breannefun
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Nov 23, 2004 |
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I'm not sure there is anything to nitpick on this story. It seems very well imagined, told, and then edited. The different punishments used on Tami are more than detailed, they're explored in full. As for the writing, once again Mr. Alexander shows his talent. (10/10)
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