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Sadie's Education
Author: justin benedict
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(Added on Nov 28, 2004)
(This month 53966 readers) (Total 70917 readers) |
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Sadie learns to be a domme from her business college typing teacher! |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Nov 30, 2004 |
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Hard to categorize this one for me. I *HATE* this type of story, normally. But not this one.
Justin, you write a good Domme story with a few good twists now and again. I would recommend you have someone read the story before posting, as there are a few minor corrections which need to be done, but nothing serious; one was that you got character names mixed while punishing Aubrey.
One thing I might suggest is working at being a little more revealing of the victim's feelings as he suffers, and a little more of the Domme's feelings as well. I'd like to get to know your characters a little.
Good work! (7/10)
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lex ludite
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Nov 29, 2004 |
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Let me say at the onset that I thoroughly enjoyed this one. It certainly was over the top in many places, but what's a little excess between friends? However I would have enjoyed it more if the some of the sentences that weren't sentences had been corrected. I would have enjoyed it even more so if the typos and some of the other oversights and loose ends that usually are corrected in a second draft were made. By the way, how many times did Aubrey take off his coveralls? Why was Sadie suddenly half naked the first time she met Aubrey? All my complaints are things that can easily be mended provided the author exerts some discipline. Personally editing is my least favorite activity, but I believe that it makes things easier for the reader and demonstrates that I do care about my little story. One other thing, I did enjoy the ending, it was perfect. (7/10)
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