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Just Another Church Sunday
Author: shanon
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(Added on Dec 3, 2004)
(This month 27524 readers) (Total 39542 readers) |
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Every Sunday, my Master inspects me before we go to church to make sure that I am suitably prepared. As a Catholic, he has taught me about the seven cardinal sins - of which two my Master and I are especially prone to: wrath and lust. But he also taught me that Masters and slaves have different paths to avoid sin, each depending on the other. An important lesson that he teaches me more about... every Sunday. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 25, 2009 |
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As a freethinker, I overly enjoy these S/M stories with an overtly religious background. Every time I read someone has to do penance, in whatever lecherous way, I can only say "serves 'em right". Always with a twinkle in my eye, of course.
Here however, the church is just up the road, and just a premise (promise?) to set the story.
The main course has nothing, or not much to do with catholic guilt, but with what the synopsys says: a thorough check-up of wifey by hubby, before they take-of to attend the service.
To some the aspect of getting the wife in a church, the house of the almighty, with all her delicious accoutrements, can add to the thrill, to me it adds nothing but the knowledge that they're going somewhere. Which is spicey, I admit it.
Nevertheless, a very nice, well-written piece of prose.
JJ (9/10)
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mkemse
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Apr 30, 2006 |
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enough said (9/10)
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Kira
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Jan 7, 2005 |
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Wow this story has make me hot, very erotic written. Please write another story, this was great. (10/10)
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delish
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Dec 15, 2004 |
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I'm with the rest of the reviewers- more, please! Sex and religion seems to be a theme with me lately, so I appreciate finding this story. Very well written and delicious mood/buildup. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
mgmoore
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Dec 6, 2004 |
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Damm fine piece of writing. I know you were limited to 6000 words but it's a story well worth continuing. and yes you do have a preverse view of sin and redemption. (10/10)
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longrover
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Dec 5, 2004 |
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Very well written, but way too close to my own experience for anything like an objective comment. Creeped me out. It's good etiquette to thank someone who raises old ghosts, though, right? So, thanks, I think. Nijhhhhh! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
pbugler
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Dec 4, 2004 |
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shanon,
I loved this story, but ... it's way too short :( you've built us up with a marvellous slow sensuous beginning, but now we need more. You see we readers are insatiable once we get hold of a great plot-line and good writing to boot! Very enjoyable and highly erotic. (9/10)
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