|
|
|
|
|
Debbie's View
Author: Vrykolakas
|
| |
(Added on Dec 14, 2004)
(This month 12284 readers) (Total 25893 readers) |
| |
This is what happens when a gynocentric group of public figures dismisses and humiliates one of their own. Hell hath no furry. |
| Ratings and Reviews: |
| Number
of Ratings: 1 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
| 1 |
2 |
3 |
4 |
5 |
6 |
7 |
8 |
9 |
10 |
| 0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
100% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
|
Weighed
Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (6/10) |
| Highest
Rating: (6/10) |
| Lowest
Rating: (6/10) |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
chksng19
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Dec 16, 2004 |
| |
A truly funny parody, with the odd twist at the end. I've thought those thoughts about those bitc, ah, I mean 'ladies' for quite a while.... though Lucy likely did deserve the rape; good use for those light tubes.
Seriously, waaay too many silly mistakes. Wrong words, to for too, many more. That needs to stop if you want readers. The story is funny, and funny needs no distractions. Get a literate editor to help catch mistakes. (6/10)
|
|
|
About 