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Life Looks Up
Author: Cavadarossi
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(Added on Dec 14, 2004)
(This month 14187 readers) (Total 37716 readers) |
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Amber is starting a new career in LA and decides her Asian neighbor would make an excellent maid, if only Amber can find a way to convince her. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (6.5/10) |
Average
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Reviewer:
rhmusic
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Sep 24, 2005 |
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Love the plot! The twists and turns, and how the hierarchy is shifting. Keep up the good work. (9/10)
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Reviewer:
Mr. Pete
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Apr 1, 2005 |
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The reason you're getting hosed in the reviews is because the story is lacking in explicit sex... why leave out all the details?! I'm giving you a provisional 10 in hopes of getting you to fill in the gaps, because there's big potential for great humiliation and reluctant sex! (10/10)
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Reviewer:
sam2004
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Dec 17, 2004 |
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ok hope this gets better and beter start is ok (6/10)
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Reviewer:
mkemse
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Dec 14, 2004 |
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waiting to see what is next (5/10)
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Reviewer:
Cokera
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Dec 14, 2004 |
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"Assume the position!" In a well thought out plot this works but lets see what is next............ (4/10)
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- Replied by:
Cavadarossi
(Edit) (Jul 15, 2005)
- I've revised the story... any better?
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