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Sweet Revenge
Author: Sardonicus
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(Added on Dec 29, 2004)
(This month 24673 readers) (Total 45771 readers) |
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Two women are hired to teach a man a lesson. He is mistreated badly for several days, then abandoned in a school yard for the police. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (8/10) |
Average
Rating: (8.5/10) |
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Reviewer:
AVI8R
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May 15, 2005 |
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Good, well written. I especially liked the descriptions of cbt. I enjoy reading stories of ball torture and this story does it well. The torturer secures his balls prior to beating them and after working them over uses lotions to add to the scrotal torture. I would have liked more descrioption of the sickening feeling he experienced resulting from the ball beatings. I vividly recall a few times I received a blast to the balls, playing football, and the sickening feeling afterward. I personally didn't care for the ending (leaving him naked in a public schoolyard) but the rest of the story was good and well written. I also would have prefered him to have been gagged for the entire episode. (9/10)
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Reviewer:
2licks4u3
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Jan 8, 2005 |
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good read! hurt just thinking about it! ty (8/10)
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Reviewer:
bdsmbill
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Jan 5, 2005 |
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Another good story from an excellent writer. I hope to see more soon. (8/10)
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Reviewer:
egwmilaw
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Dec 30, 2004 |
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I have read all your stories...and I think this is the best...! Very interesting plot....and very clever tortures!! Keep writing stories Sardonicus!! (9/10)
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