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Summer Vacation
Author: Zeferage
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(Added on Jan 3, 2005)
(This month 161988 readers) (Total 284773 readers) |
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Story of a mother, her step daughter and the daughter's best friend, and the summer vacation they shared. |
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Average (?):  (10/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Martiniman
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Dec 19, 2011 |
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A wonderful light story that is very erotic & sexy. Unfortunately...this is another unfinished story. This story shows great promise & it's unfortunate that it was not continued as I was greatly enjoying it. Needless to say...I so wish it would be finished! (10/10)
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Dryhill
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May 25, 2010 |
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i can only be grateful that i came across this story now (May 2010). i do not know how i could have waited the 4 years that have elapsed since the last part of this story was posted. Please, please let us have more, what does happen next? i am on my knees begging you for another chapter (oh and another about Kim's uni experiances, they sound fun. Oh yes and another about how the two girls met. And lots more). Grovel, grovel, lick shoes/feet, more groveling. (10/10)
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25toLife
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Sep 9, 2006 |
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What happens now?What happens now?What happens now?What happens now?What happens now?What happens now?What happens now?What happens now?What happens now?What happens now?What happens now?What happens now?What happens now?What happens now?What happens now?What happens now?What happens now?What happens now?What happens now?What happens now?What happens now?What happens now?What happens now?What happens now?What happens now? (10/10)
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tee
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Oct 6, 2005 |
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One of the most well written stories on this site. Not only are the characters slowly and deliberately put through their paces, physically and even more so, mentally (like all good play), but the stories readers are taken on a similar trip. Bravo. (10/10)
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jojo76199
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Sep 13, 2005 |
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great story (10/10)
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Dürrer
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Jun 7, 2005 |
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(10/10)
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BDSM_Tourguide
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Jun 4, 2005 |
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Fabulous story. It's keeping me in suspense. I can't wait to read what happen next. (9/10)
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Dangermouse
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Jun 3, 2005 |
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First Rate! Was a tad slow at first but worth the wait. I hope the next chapter(s) come soon. (10/10)
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La Toya
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May 7, 2005 |
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Before giving a 10 rating I would like to see what happens in the next couple chapters. One can hope the writer doesn't take too long in posting them (9/10)
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sunburststrat
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Mar 3, 2005 |
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Zeferage, you get an A+ for torturing the reader. How on earth could you leave us hanging just as Wanda is leading Kim out of the bedroom? My mind had already been racing ahead, fantasizing about what comes next, even before that scene. Don't you dare stop here!
(10/10)
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DarkPen
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Feb 19, 2005 |
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This is a very good story. Action is hot, nothing too over the top(not that over the top is bad)
(10/10)
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Aeneas
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Jan 24, 2005 |
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Delightful tale so far. Love the pacing. The teasing, the tormenting, the denial with the promise of total fulfillment as the reward to submission is a joy to witness. I do hope the author rewards us sooner than her victims with more of the story, (10/10)
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sarijak02
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Jan 14, 2005 |
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Wonderful so far. Very hot. More please. (10/10)
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LikesItSoft
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Jan 12, 2005 |
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Loved it. Sensual and erotic without being too soft. Love the pictures it paints. It plays in my head like a movie. MORE!!! (9/10)
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farside757
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Jan 5, 2005 |
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wow, cant wait to read more. (10/10)
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ms2bused
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Jan 4, 2005 |
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Finally, this is a complete, sensual treasure! SO few authors write of 'teasing/denial' amongst lesbian women makes this a treat of treats! I can hardly wait for the ensuing chapters! I can only hope that Wanda will eventually also ensnare Kim into the web of her dominationand frustrating control!
An avid new fan,
JaneenMarie O'Brien (10/10)
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grainbeltnews
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Jan 4, 2005 |
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Most excellent! Details were intriguing, and the interaction betweeen the characters seemed "real" and not forced. (10/10)
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pinemp
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Jan 3, 2005 |
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Great story so far! Please continue and use more of the daughter and her sexy body! (10/10)
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